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for Fallen Angel

by alleycat88

person Bastian
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay so since I am reviewing does that mean I get a nice hot make up sex scene in the next chapter?

Great chappy! Loved the scene with Harry and the twins and the smut in the hallway was kinky and so exhibitioned (is that word? well it is now) and hot! I hope you update again very soon! Although it was rather sad about Harry remembering the situation at the Manor hopefully he wont dwell on it and see exactly what he does to Draco and use it to his advantage!

*Dont forget make up sex!*
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 14! Hermione will help fix things!
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 14! Hermione will help fix things!
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooo *whines* harry can't hate him! they were perfect together...please please make him realize that very soon :(
person kittycat30
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Draco may be sorry, but he needs to grovel more before Harry forgives him! I hope Harry makes him work for it!!!
person anniea
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omfg people review they just have to have the make-up sex. seriously having moldywart take advantage of harry like that was brillant and the TWINS boy harry gets around quick. and then he gets it on with draco. on the bright side harry......DRACO TOLD YOU THE TRUTH! he admitted that he took advantage of harry before that time. how often does someone actually tell harry the truth? BLESSING IN DISGUISE HARRY IT'S A BLESSING IN DISGUISE! update soon loving the story *kisses*
person Jan
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! We can't have that, can't we? We all need them to have those fantastic make up sex sessions, don't we?!

Please update chapter 14 soon. ^_^
person rinchan
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read up to this far yet, just copying and pasting it on to word so I could read it even when I'm not online/when I have time. But I'll make sure to read it.
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Make up sex!
person Sere
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love it! Okay, I reviewed!
person Annie
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is one big mess the two boys are in. I hope those two can overlook their past and move on to the future! :D