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January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sad face :'( there isn't any more.
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November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow what a BRILLANT PLOT, I LOVE IT. More soon please!!!!
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September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I THINK THIS STORY IS BRILLANT, PLEASE CAN YOU UP DATE SOON !!!!
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good! Do you have any intention of updating it though? Please do!!!!
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this story, please update
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great need more
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the way you write fanfiction reminds me of stephanie meyer's way of writing. they easily fell in love.. there were impending doom and somehow they were easily captured, then they were easily released, somehow voldemort turned out to be a good guy. somehow the danger hadn't end yet. and somehow i imagine you're working up the stress about azazel's cruelty or whatever it is and then it will easily end in a happily ever after kind of ending.
i think that you have great imagination, but perhaps you should give more depth to your story. allow your characters to have more time and more drama to deal with..
and why aren't the students confused with the similarity between harry and tom anw?
i think that you have great imagination, but perhaps you should give more depth to your story. allow your characters to have more time and more drama to deal with..
and why aren't the students confused with the similarity between harry and tom anw?
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great fic! I hope the not-so-recent date does not mean that it is abandoned, but just that you're taking a break...
While I generally dislike fics that involve other worlds and species and turn Voldemort into a sappy lover, I must say that the dynamics between Harry, Draco and Tom are fun indeed - and the sex is good. ^^
I have a few points of critique, as well, though: For one, chapters 10-16 and 19-21 have bad formatting. On my computer, the text goes beyond the edge of the screen, which is beyond annoying. Then, 'Rona' in ch. 10 might enjoy being given back her male form. Also, ch.11: Luna's a Ravenclaw, why is she sitting with the Gryffs? At least a word of explanation would be nice. Ch. 13. I don't like that Hermione, the ever-reasonable one, just tells Harry to go right back to Draco when Harry only just realized that Draco more or less raped him the other day. That's not what a friend should do, never mind that Harry will eventually have to be with Draco. At that moment, it would have been better for him to wait awhile until Draco realizes himself that he fucked up.
...After that, I sort of didn't pay any more attention to minor details as I was rather happily taking in all the slashy goodness. *ggg*
While I generally dislike fics that involve other worlds and species and turn Voldemort into a sappy lover, I must say that the dynamics between Harry, Draco and Tom are fun indeed - and the sex is good. ^^
I have a few points of critique, as well, though: For one, chapters 10-16 and 19-21 have bad formatting. On my computer, the text goes beyond the edge of the screen, which is beyond annoying. Then, 'Rona' in ch. 10 might enjoy being given back her male form. Also, ch.11: Luna's a Ravenclaw, why is she sitting with the Gryffs? At least a word of explanation would be nice. Ch. 13. I don't like that Hermione, the ever-reasonable one, just tells Harry to go right back to Draco when Harry only just realized that Draco more or less raped him the other day. That's not what a friend should do, never mind that Harry will eventually have to be with Draco. At that moment, it would have been better for him to wait awhile until Draco realizes himself that he fucked up.
...After that, I sort of didn't pay any more attention to minor details as I was rather happily taking in all the slashy goodness. *ggg*
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story, please update soon.
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Just a short note: Formatting of chapter 4 is screwed up. The text trails off somewhere far outside the screen...
Otherwise, I'm enjoying the fic a lot. ^^
- k.
Just a short note: Formatting of chapter 4 is screwed up. The text trails off somewhere far outside the screen...
Otherwise, I'm enjoying the fic a lot. ^^
- k.