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for Our Only Hope

by LadyJay

schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Severus and Harry should bring hell upon the wizarding world.
person MissGirl
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Can't wait for the next update. Your stories seem to make me cry. You're good at that. Keep it up!
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey...
i've never really been a fan of the stories that start years after harry left school, after either harry or snape retreated into the muggle world... but you have converted me. I like the way you have kept the characters more or else true to themselves, & i look forward o reading more!
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh & i forgot to mention i really like how you have given the "evil" characters, like hermione, reasons for what they have done, rather then just make them evil. You have really kept them believable.
person Auris Shira
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will continue soon. I like all your stories and I hope you will continue Diamons. Thanks
person kunitsu
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It seems that Harry likes Severus unconciously. Oooooh I cant wait for the wizarding world to feel Severus's wrath and I get the feeling that Harry wont do anything to stop him, maybe pretend to stop him but nothing more. Hmmm when Severus encircled Harry with his arms, I found it sweet.

Update again soon
person alexiel
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story! and it goes better and better! i am sooooo exiting in the next happenings (even so i know ... or at least i think i know ;) what is going to happen beween our two boys!) i hope you update really soon!
person DarkKat
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO, Not a cliffhanger! Why did you have to stop just be for Harry and Severus start with the ritual and the fucking?

*Ashlin's ears (cat) lay flat on her head and her tail moves in irritation*

*Ashlin takes deep breath*

Anyways, I like your story so far. Besides the cliffhanger! Keep writing!
Ashlin Raine
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for the two men. And yet... "Raymond" does have a strong point (as usual) Harry needs to stop waiting on the wizarding world to tell him how they're going to mess up his life next. Together these two could right a lot of wrongs in the wizarding world. If they don't kill each other first.

And I can't help but wonder what Snape has in store for Draco. *G*
person Extraho
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the daeth eater had returned.... i loved that