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for Our Only Hope

by LadyJay

person Lumcer
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while I'm glad I ran across this story again! You've updated several times since I last looked in on it! I love how it worked out though I think it would be interesting if you wrote a sort of summery of how things turned out maybe another ten years down the road... kind of where everyone one is now... anyway glad you didn't give it up!

KCK-Lumcer
person bluecimmers
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyable story. I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your work.
person kunitsu
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didnt expect the chaos to go out of control like that. It was amusing to see Lily try to protect her father, so cute
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. However I would recommend looking up lose and loose differences. "I am losing my magic/I will lose my magic" as opposed to "I am letting that dog loose from its leash"

Otherwise I see no real problems and think this is a good read.
person kuntisu
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that was an interesting finding, I'm kinda surprised that they took it so well.
person akaihimena
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I can think of is Bwahahahahaha XD I can't wait to see what Sev and Harry have in store for them. Yay Update soon!
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting!!
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope to read more thank you for this delightful story.
person kunitsu
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow I missed this story, I'm happy to see an update. Ooooooooooooooh the revenge is coming and I cant wait to see what it will be. Love the last part of the chapter ^__^
person akaihimena
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that this is updated! I have been waiting for so long. I like that Harry and Sev. will be on the same page ^_^ revenge is sweet but even sweeter when Sev and Harry do it. Please update soon! <3