rate_review Reviews

I'd like to see more of this story.

First, you missed a er on the end of the he, right before the sickening sound or was it crunch? Well anyway, this was short and melancholy. And strangely enough in some way sweet. I liked the end where he was reborn as a raven, while the ravens rejoiced around him. I liked the shortness of it, straight to the point. Although I question why Draco left him in the first place, I'm in no way asking for a continuation or a prequel. but just an answer. Sometimes things are left better off alone, which is why I think it's completely up to you to write more to this. I like that there are no "words" in this. When the dialogue is missing it makes you read between the lines and question yourself what conversations took place, it leave room for the imagination. Good work. I'm now interested in reading more from you.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

Why was it over? Why kill himself? He was reborn as a raven? Is there more?