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for Featherlight Taction

by ssjrice

person Jags
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow it's really good so far
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww I just read all 17 chapters at once, it's kind of hard having all of this reading material and then having it come to an abrupt halt. I love your story!!! However I did have one question, and if it's already been asked and answered I apologize. Earlier in the story Voldemort referred to Harry as less than intelligent believing that he only surrounded himself with people less witless than himself, is this still the case? Or is he just pursuing(ish) a man whom he believes to be a complete moron? Lol just wondering, anywho can't wait until you update again <3!
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So much feelings
I can say you do really good at keeping them from OOC.And the angst and emotion between them gets me totally soaked.(can I use it like this?My English is not good enough to tell you how much I feel from your writing)
please update soon,I really like your story.

Why dear tom keeps let harry escape?Well,I guess he is really confused,doesn't he? I imagine he keep harry in his bedroom and so on......(well........)

Will Tom get his fresh body back (without the touch) at the very last??

I'm looking forward to the reason why this fic is posed on AFF.......(*blush and snickers*)
person Canus
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where have you gone and why?! This hasn't been updated since 2007! It's almost 2009! *cries* This is like my favorite HP/LV fic and you're not updating! It's like a nightmare!!! *cries*
person laica
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have notist that you have updatet this story on ff.net but not here why.
i realy like your story, please update soon
person Roguelle
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eep! Thank you muchly for this story- it's much more complex than many other HP/LV stories and I really want to know where it's going!
person Aeris
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude, this is so awesome. you gotta lemme know when ya update.
person gabyps
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic! It's really hard to find good HPLV fics where both of them remain in character and I think your LV is very credible. I also really like that it's lengthy and has plot, and that they get together slowly and with a lot of angst. I just hope they end up together and that LV won't be killed, after all, he is slowly becoming more human. I just want to say keep it up, I love it and pleease update soon!!
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*points accusingly at Lupin and growls* CANCER STICK!!!! *steals all of Lupin's poisonness sticks of evil, soaks in gasoline and sets on fire*

In other news... Heehee, Ron in a muggle cabin! I can just imagine him poking at at a toaster in confusion, or an electrical socket!

"Hey, 'mione. What this?" He jabs his finger into the socket.
"Ron, no!"
BZZZT!
Fried Weasel!
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I hate angsty drama. I hate angst. *angstangstangst*

I just realised now that these impromptu reviews are probably annoying as hell, but they are keeping me from bashing my head on the wall from the angst. Not that it is terribly angsty, because believe me when I have seen angst. Ugh. Anyways! *points finger* FFN, HPFandom... I lurk on both, so why have I only found this fic now? HM?!

And what do you mean that they won't be romping lie rabbits and popping out the babehs?!?!one!!!1! I'm just kidding. :P Though I am certainly not opposed to romping like bunnies on viagra. I don't know if I should be sad that you say that Harry won't be running away to be with Voldie at the end. You have also said he wasn't going dark, *frowny face*, but that's ok. He can still be the head-strong Harry that we all love and hate. Sure Tom can be "redeemed" but asking for forgiveness isn't the same thing as receiving forgiveness, ya know? Sure Harry may tolerate him one day just to appease the lust in his pants, but he has to start using his noggin.

Anyways, there is still more to read and weep, so I shall do that.

Lady D