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for Zingaro

by ccino49

person Miepje
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snort* I'm still snickering about the hedgehog. ^^
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL what a cute mental image
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wish Snape would cook for me. Top scran! Don't know if you ever watched 'Brookside' but the characters in that were always talking about 'scran' - I wonder if they nicked it off the gypsies.

I want to know about Paula's background - sounds like her dad may have been a regular wizard (because I bet he wasn't a plain old Muggle).
person Miepje
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it's good to have friends in high places ^^ And it seems like Severus is getting a bit jealous :)

Thanks for the great update!
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I feel for poor Paula now! All that sexual tension, and her customs prevent her from ever acting on it. Argh! Frustration City!

I'm sure they'll find a way round it ;-).
person Miepje
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I hope Paula isn't in as much trouble as Severus thinks she is, because being locked up in Azkaban would kill her.
And not even kissing? Looks like there will be loads of UST. The poor couple. *grin*

*wow* You're updating really fast! Keep it up! :)
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, you're doing a great job of providing translations as you write, so it's all very readable thanks!

I loved the bats in Sev's hair. And his gobsmacked reaction to Paula's blatant seduction tactics. I like the strong, confident OFC in this story and the way she challenges Severus. Nice work.
person vampkestrel
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapters i love how fast you post
person vampkestrel
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah almost time for her to spill can't wait to find out what she's hiding
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on sing it with me gals,

"Oh! I'm not a pheasant plucker or a pheasant plucker's son, but I can pluck a pheasant til the pheasant plucker comes!"