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by ccino49

schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I'm so glad she won't be stealing babies in the middle of the night. I was worried there for a minute. It's amazing to me how bigotted people are even in this 'modern' age, but the gypsy stereotypes still prevail.

Well you've dished out plenty to think about. I love Reily.

I can't wait for the conversations between Paula/Alastor and Paula/Tonks.
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol evil severus... lol yes please do send a pic vampkestrel@yahoo.com
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Sev and the Hufflepuff girl, having such a rubbish first time. I've got the feeling Paula's first time might be a bit more memorable... Lol at the savnat...and the chit charm makes me laugh for some reason.
person lizziek
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hellooooo, Earth to Paula! Sexy Severus Snape wants to travel along with you on his vacation. *sigh* Some girls just don't know when they have it good.

I'm glad she got away from the hostile gypsies but it's too bad she's banished. That horse/thestral/unicorn of hers might need a place to stay again one day. Oh, but now th Hagrid's coming! Hagrid will probably treat Riley as if he were a fuzzy little kitten.

So I think Snape will get into some trouble with that car or maybe Paula didn't get away as clean as she thought. Either way, an entire Winter break can't go by without at least a *little* foreplay for these two.

It's still a lovely story and I'm looking forward to more, per usual.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm interesting i should like to see a picture of riley he sounds really cool.
person Miepje
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving Snape's driving skills - well,you can't be good at EVERYTHING.
person pittwitch
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Riley, ;) I can hardly keep up with you woman! Thanks for sharing. Pitt
person lizziek
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow - so many new chapters, this is great. It's understandable that she'd want to get away. I think Snape had better get off his cute bum and talk to Albus about seriously dating Paula. Time's a wasting and lemons must be had at some point. It's sweet that they're courting and I'm hoping they get stranded in a lust-inducing blizzard. Oh, but how cruel to make her a 29 year old virgin! Oy. I have visions of Steve Carell in gypsy garb.

I'm still interested in her mysterious father. I look forward to learning more about him. I'm sure more details about her magic and soul-searching/healing will be forthcoming too. I loved the dragon reading and the whole Free Draggie thing. I'm one of those people who are uncomfortable in zoos, so I found it very sweet.

Keep up the good work, Ccino - I love your stories. Poor, sexually frustrated Severus is so delicious. If you're posting new chapters this fast, I'll have to remember to check frequently.

Oh, and it's "Eggy" is it? o_O
person vampkestrel
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yea updates lol poor snape no kissy face for him.