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by ccino49

schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Need to know why the centaurs are so hostile to Paula. Will Severus be able to talk to them?

Update soon (I know you will ;-)).
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh sneaky potters what is the translation for the last line she says? "Chces li tajnou vec aneb pravdu vyzv
person lizziek
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ccino, these two have just GOT to have some lemons soon - sheesh!

I like the idea of the new defense class - they should learn some pretty interesting stuff, Snape too - maybe. I thought flying with Riley at top speed was hilarious. Poor Severus is not getting any breaks from this lady (or her companion).

I was sort of hoping she'd save Dumbledore but it seems from this last chapter that it's not in the cards. I had this vision of him borrowing her wagon and travelling around as an old gypsy dude. *sigh* Well, some things are not meant to be.

Good on ya for fixing up Moody's eye - he really needed that.

It's always fun to find new chapters of this story up and ready. You're too good to us, Ccino, but I still can't wait for more.
person Miepje
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wow* That was some vow Paula took; I hope she'll be able to help. Severus will need all the help he can get. The ride on Riley was very funny ^^ Traveling with Paula is never boring!
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Watch out for Draco! I hope they work out what he's up to.
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a hilarious ride on Riley. Can't wait to read about the new dark magic class. I think maybe Severus needs some private lessons with Paula to learn some of her tricks. His pride could never let some of those kids show him up.

Sansa
person Miepje
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great updates! Glad to see that Severus was impressed by the students, and that everything went well with the order. I hope Tonks gets her man, or wolverine *grin* Paula and Severus flying away on Riley; can
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol who knew ron had it in him nice update
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, Voldemort's such a bigoted prat, isn't he? On top of all the other bad qualities. Wow, I was really fascinated to see that the Romany word for baby is chav. I bet that's where it comes from too.

I LOVE all this new stuff I'm learning, almost as much as I love the interesting plot and the developing relationship between Paula and Snape.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. I do hope Severus will ask the headmaster about being Paula's sweetheart. Love that you put Riley in, Miss horses hate me! Would love to see the picture of him, could you send it to me? Pretty please. Was Reilly influenced by Pitt?

Sansa