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Hi, I just finished reading chapter 11 and I really like this story so far. It's not what I typically read (I love my m/m-ness) but it's really good. I'll be back later to read more of it.

X cacoethes

ohh coming near the climax it seems

Where do you get your imagination from? You amaze me. This story is just tied in so well with the actual story. Rune stones. Can't wait to see what that is for. Just what task does Albus's souls have left to do? It is so great that Paula is willing to see if she can heal the Longbottom's souls. I really hope she can do it. Neville is such a great kid. He deserves his family back. Forgot to ask. Does Paula know that Sev talked to Albus about his intentions for her? Is that why she kissed him, or was she simply not able to keep her hands off him any more. After all, with everything going on, it is a very emotional time.

Sansa

This story is just moving right along. I like how Paula is so involved in everything. Yay, they kissed. I wish the order was a little more trusting of her, but I guess I can understand where they are coming from. I like how she was the catalyst for Ron going back. That line about Snape's heart was great. I loved it. Can't wait to see what Minerva want to talk to Paula about. Is it because she knows that Snape is not really bad? Maybe?

Sansa

Glad that Paula gave Severus the anti venem herbs, but what in the heck is she going to do with Dumbledore's soul hanging out in her wagon? Did Albus release the wil-o-the-wisp before he died, or did it go by its self when he died?

Sansa

I think Bella was really lucky that Paula healed her face; she certainly didn't deserve it imo. I'm glad Paula got out of that place.
I'm glad Severus has asked Albus permission to court Paula, if they both servive the war. Those herbs that help against Nagini's poison should be very useful!

nice job you didn't shirk from the gore it was just enough to make a point but not so much that it was overboard. evil cliffy though

Well, she made a mess of Bellatrix, didn't she? Couldn't have happened to a nicer woman though...

Seems like they're more than a match for Voldemort when they join forces.

Oh my, I think there is going to be one very irate potions master. How long is it going to take him to get over that? Good thing Voldie didn't punish him for bringing her, or will he get to that at a later date. I hope not! I guess Paula can speak parcel tounge. That was some fancy foot work that she did. Bella got off easy. I don't think I'd have healed her all the way. I think I'd have left her a few scars. What did Paula say to her at the end? What is her reading going to tell her? Other than he is a psycho maniac? I think Harry thinks she is kind of nuts, but instictivly trusts her. Could it be the shared blood? I really can't wait till she tells him they are related.

Sansa

aww i hope the little will o the wisp will help her save snape from nagini....don't die snape we love you *cries* good update lol the tension is mounting