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by ccino49

schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for the Moonfire White Diamond. He's going to be OK, yes? (Sighs with relief).
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked Riley's images of what happened after the battle. It would have been interesting to know that in DH. Anyway, I'm scared....she shouldn't leave Severus. More please... :-)

Cacoethes
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just caught up on quite a few chapters. Good, good, good! So much has happened. You can't let him die! He had better choose to live! I know that you would never let us down like that though. Please let us know the outcome very soon!

Sansa
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah...much better. :-) I like how you ran Severus's story together with what Harry saw in the chapter "King's Cross."

Cacoethes
person vampkestrel
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries* nooooo so sad resurection? maybe? pllleeeeeeeeasssseee?
person lizziek
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No worries, Ccino - he is so NOT dead. I look forward to future chapters.

So - does cooking a whole chicken in clay actually remove the feathers? I had no idea. Neat trick if it does that.
person pittwitch
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you actually will let Snape die, not you, no way. Fenrir - yes, a horrible, nasty gruesome, painful, slow death, but not SNAPE! Get back to work woman, chop chop chop!
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! I didn't realize it was the last chapter. How sad that poor Sev has been killed off AGAIN. *cries* I was expecting something else from Paula, though. Like an explanation as to why she couldn't save him. It just ended suddenly. Other than the evil ending, -.- it was a good story. Thank you for sharing it! :-)

X cacoethes
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You didn't have to. Hmph...

But he's coming back in the next chapter, right?

Right?!
person Miepje
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! What have you done!?

*sob*

I really hope you can fix this...