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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! The ending... I laughed so hard. She found her potion... It was all in poor Harry's mind... His poor nerves. Nice story. I enjoyed reading it. Draco was a bit fishy inbetween, but in the end it fell into place for me.
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March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so great! love the ending hehe!
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your insights into Snape and Harry as characters, I think, are brilliant. I totally agree with you Snape would be a different person when in love. I have seen real Snapes turn absolutely kitten-like under the influence of love. That is its power, don't you think?
Look at how he held onto his love for Lily. Look at all it compelled him to do! And, I think that if this story had really taken place, Snape would have been quite open once he really let his gaurds down. He would not want to lose what he had found. Your line about Snape opening himself up to Harry ... giving Harry the power to finish him off and not really knowing why was just right on the mark.
Well done.
Elizabeth
Look at how he held onto his love for Lily. Look at all it compelled him to do! And, I think that if this story had really taken place, Snape would have been quite open once he really let his gaurds down. He would not want to lose what he had found. Your line about Snape opening himself up to Harry ... giving Harry the power to finish him off and not really knowing why was just right on the mark.
Well done.
Elizabeth
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brilliant!!!!!!!!
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stares then bursts out laughing* you have got to be kidding! so much for Harry's claim of not thinking it up on his own... I guess he just needed a push! wonderful ending *snigger* Too bad we didn't see more of Malfoy though...