rate_review Reviews

Very very sexy...

People are more likely to read your story if you don't put them off by telling everyone your summary is bad. Because to be honest if you don't believe enough even in your summary no one will read your story.

That was brill (did i just say brill? bugger)

I really enjoyed this, i likeed how you made Hermione a wee bit of a drinker. It makes her fallable and so a little more human and easier for the reader to relate to. I prefer it when authers do that, because if you make Hermione perfect, i dont know, i feel like maybe they should just write a Mary-Sue (not that i have a problem with M-S's, but you know) and its something that i like to do because it makes her seem less like a preud. My thinking is, if you were Hermione dealing with War and Death and fearing for ones life, surly any normal teenager would turn to drinking, smoking or some other bad habit or vice to help regain some control in ones life. So, bravo!!!

Also, man do i wish that i was there instead of Hermione...that is a night in i would not turn down!!

I enjoyed it considerabally, and i am going off now to read your other story.

I also disagree that saying the summery is bad means less people will read it. I mean, i liked the summery you put with it, and if you felt that it was crap, then surly the actually story would be way better. I find that i am more likly to go look at a story if someone says their summery is crap, because it makes you wonder if it really is just crap and makes you ask the question 'how much better is the story?' but thats just me.

Loved the writing and the voices and i cant wait to read more from you

A very, very good story, I hope you will make more of those. Though I follow several WIP, oneshots are a welcome change, its great to be able to have a complete story in one go sometimes. I will be sure to look for more stories by you:-))