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i love this story and it just keeps getting better!!

WOW....that was absolutely incredible. Loved all three of the chapters. I think that your story is just wonderful, and I hope that you update again very very soon. It is so greatly written, and the words just seem to flow, no awkward tenses of anything. As to the shout-out that you made in chapter 12, I would love to provide you with a list of really good D/Hr and D/H. Just feel free to send me a quick email at britishtushi13@yahoo.com Update soon!!!

♥♥♥ Tasha

P.S. if you don't have a beta already, I would love to beta for you :)

damn your good,,this is a really good story...you have got to post more soon,,,lots more....damn where is my husband when i need him,,,i loved that last chapter...gave me some ideals...lol...cant wait to read more...damn your good...

Amazing, amazing, amazing! It's kinda sad that Draco and Hermione couldn't wait, but God knows I couldn't have, either *g* I even felt sorry for Hermione, being forced to wait just cos Draco wanted to act the gentleman. It's good he didn't *evil grin*
Will we get another smut scene from those two? Let's say some romantic setting rather than the bathroom floor? ;-)

The thing about George's daughter was really unexpected. Hopefully Molly won't disembowel him once she finds out for sure *g*

And yes, Millie's sure got Ron wrapped around her finger now! Good work *g*

Please keep it up, this is a wonderful story! I really love it and I can't wait to find out what you're planning next ;-)

Please don't change your style for me! I am loving the story as a whole!!! Though, I'll definately say thankyou for that scene in the Prefects bathroom! lol
As far as the other couples go, you've hit upon another of my favourites with Blaise/Ginny, and I would love to see where you take them! ;)
As for Luna and George, it's not a pairing I've ever considered before. I feel Ron/Luna is rather overdone, because most of the fics I find with her tend to have Ron tking her as a consolation prize when Draco wind Hermione's heart. And I have always felt Luna too special for that. I have considered writing a Luna/Charlie myself, because I think that would be an interesting match. But I am definately intrigued by the notion of she and George together. George's subplot with Natalie looks to be a very interesting one, and I can't wait to see Luna's reaction. Even though they are yet to interact in here, there is definately a rightness about the idea of them being a couple, so much so that I find myself asking why I never considered this before.
Pansy and Harry is a couple that I've always approached with some wariness, because they are very hard to actually "fit", if you know what I mean. But, again, you have made this work. I love the irony of their relationship, and the mixture of frustration/satisfaction that is building between them.
Ron and Millie is an even harder couple to work with then Pansy/Harry, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for them. The teasers you have given so far are very appealing!
*grins sheepishly* Sorry about the novel-length review, but I really do love this story. It is one of the first I check for updates whenever I log in. lol On that note, I'm going to go and read the next chappy you've left... ;)

i gotta say i love this story

Loved it! Two chapters at once....a dream come true. Can't wait for more! Seriously love this story!

Damn, but you know how to write!!! I am so very impressed. Every time I think you've reached the limits of writing you come back and prove that you can change the pace and make it even better. lol

Where do I start? Hmm....how about the beginning? lol The scene between Molly and Minerva is wonderful! I loved seeing them as just a couple of friends catching up on their gossip over a hot cuppa. It's not a side I've ever seen of either of them before, and I love it. And, oh, the end of that...where George walks in and introduces Natalie? Truly priceless! *grins* It's going to be so much fun to see how this plays out!!!

I loved the interaction between Draco and his future father-in-law. Most fics tend to centre around Hermione and how she relates to the Malfoy's, but you've made it a point to show both sides, and in a very realistic way too. Truly, truly cool. And that bit about Mione's Dad wanting to experience Apparition? Genius..lol

I liked the conversation between Harry and Ron in the hallway. It showed just the right amount of vulnerability and strength without making either of them look like a fool. *smirks slightly* Well, Ron a little, but it needed to be said. I hate it when everyone tries to pretend that Gryffindors are perfect and Slytherins are evil. It's just not that black and white.

And, do I need to comment on the scene between Ron and Millie? Hmm...methinks I will. I like that there was an obviously different dynamic between them than the one with Draco and Hermione. There should be, they are very different people, and very different couples. Plus, kudos to any girl who can get her guy to call her Master! lol Go Millie!

Please update soon. You've fed my addiction to this story a little too well. lol I need another fix...
I am dying to see what's happening with Blaise Zabini on both fronts. His burgeoning relationship with Ginny, and the meeting to come with his father. (I hope Kingsley has a hangover..lol!)

I like it. Please update soon.

oh shoots. I guess I don't have to wait for the wedding day to 'it' happen. It happened. And it happened hotly! woah! that was.... HOT!! omg.

And wait. what would Luna say about George's daughter? OMG this story has lots of hot topics. you're absolutely genius!