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for Potions and Parchment Match

by chelleybelle

person Lexy Malfoy
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh and one thing I forgot to say wasd that it's a bit odd having him call Millie 'Master' instead of 'Mistress'. Other than that this chappie was great.
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the comments about age of drinking in England. In America you must be twenty-one and when I went on google a few different things said that in England you must be eighteen.

OK OK...
The Master/Mistress scene that you are all commenting on...
Millie is not really a dom. She was proving a point to Ron about control. She doesn't ask to be called Mistress because it was not really her thing. She was put up to it by Pansy to show Ron that she wasn't going to take his crap. If you noticed, she only spanked him with her hand three times, the rest was teasing him. I commented that the room of requirement had toys in it, but again, she didn't choose to use them because it was not her thing. She only wanted to prove a point to Ron. This story is not going to turn into a Dom story between the two.
Millie is not your traditional feminine woman. I comment that she was raised without a mother, and only had her father and an older brother who she wore hand me down clothes from. She is not aware of the mistress/master thing. To her, as the daughter of a death eater, Master would be the hightest form of power. She only wants a normal life with a husband and especially children. That was what this was about. Miliie making sure that she woke Ron up to something besides the masculine slob Millie has always been. She wants him to see her as a wife and future mother, not someone to run and hide from. Now she has it. Hope that helped, and sorry if this didn't come across in my writing.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's OK...surprised that Milicent wanted Ron to call her Master instead of Mistress...does she have a gender complex? The Hermione and Draco sex scenes don't seem IC to me...but it's still fun to read about them shagging...anyways, I'll keep reading if you keep writing.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Another fabulous chapter.
person juls
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's very good so far hun. I like the fact you like well rounded fics enough to include the other couples. Continue plz. ~~juls
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ron is too funny. "Suck my cock more!"

I'm enjoying the George/Natalie storyline. I hope Hermione doesn't descend into lush-hood!
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story is amazing
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this so far. I just found this story today so read chapters 1 through 13 in one sitting. Ron really is a loser, isn't he? I feel sorry for poor Millie. I'm definitely looking forward to future chapters.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I was thrilled to see not one but two new chapters for my enjoyment. Your time was perfect for my day had been utter crap till now! Thank you for helping me find some joy in a shitty day! PLEASE POST again soon! This week looks like it is going to be flushed totally, hoping that you will help pull me through! Thanks! Laughed so hard I was in tears.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I must of missed another one of your updates cause their was 2 chapters apart from the 3 you've just added, so I'm really sorry!!! but anyway, I love love love!!!!! this story and all the pairing's excellent job!!!!!