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NO NO NO

NO DEATH SCENE!!!!!!!

Crisis. I love that you put them together! OMG I did not see that coming. Also, I am so excited that you updated!! Sheesh, it made my day!

I just adore marriage law fics and this is a WONDERFUL one. More, please! :)

Wasn't expecting that at all. It seemed that Millie and Ron's relationship was improving for a while--Ron would do anything for sex and hence be tolerable, and Romilda was starting to be less obnoxious as she started respecting Neville. I love the Neville/Millie ship. I suspect they may still get in legal trouble for flouting the lottery. Wouldn't Ron and Romilda just get fed back into the lottery and may not get each other? I rather that Ron and Romilda slowly and funnily start gaining some sort of maturity. I'm not so keen on death scenes, but it's your story.

Love those teenage hormones between Draco and Hermione and Blaise and Ginny.

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!! I want to hear about Ron's and Romilda's reactions to the new marriage. Also try not to kill them Ron may be a git but he's not evil.

OH MY GOD!!!!!!! what a twist!

I think Neville and Millie will be good together, I don't think a death scene would be a good idea because the story doesn't touch on that level it's more romance/comedy, but it's up to you I guess it depends on the circumstances? I don't know? do what sound's right to you and UPDATE SOON AGAIN PLEASE LOL!!!

never saw that one coming. i can't wait to see what you do next. please update soon.

My first time reading the fic and I think I'm hooked! I like this take of the law, very interesting. At first, I thought you were gonna hook up Snape and Harry since you said that it doesn't recognize sex and age...hahaha.

Interesting scenes. Although, I'm surprised that no one mention your misspelling of Blaise Zabini's name. That's the only thing in the story that makes me cringe everytime I read his scenes. I'm looking forward to your future chapters, I really like where this is going.

I love the story so far. Neville and Millie getting together is great. Please don't kill them! If you have to kill someone make it Ron, but only after Molly hexes him!

BLOODY HELL!!!
You must continue!!
It is really good.
I can't wait for more.

Great Job,
Angel

RE: chapter 17
Very well plotted out storyline. I enjoy it very much. I'm looking forward to further installments. Good luck with your schooling. Keep up the good work both academically and literary!

[Only one or two minor constructive criticisms:
1)the usage of to instead of too, and
2) a few cases in which you lost track of whose body part was doing what to whom and thus using the wrong pronoun, other than that, no problems.]

Take care ... =D