rate_review Reviews

I LOVE your story.....it is so "RIGHT" the way it should have been. I am only up to chapter 27, and I have been away....but I printed it an have read it on my trip. I LOVE LOVE LOVE that you are helping Alice Longbotton. I can't remember a story where anyone but Neville gave her another thought. It is Wonderful. I never thought I would like Harry and Pansy, but I do. I can easily read Draco and Hermione, but I always see Harry with Hermione. I LOVE Blaise.....always have, always will. Such a good story and I am sorry I have not reviewed enough for all your hard work. I truly appreciate your effort and I will hate to see it come to an end. BUT.....I will read more of your stories. Once again, thanks for all the hard work.....it is lovely. Now, I must get back to my reading.

Alright. I can tolerate a couple "loose" instead of "lose". I even let the "business's" slide by. But I have to give up when I see the sentence, "He was a bit hesitant to meat with the Parkinson

chellybelle- you have written a great story and have a great sense of humor!!

i loved this story from the get go. you ROCK!!!!

i hope that you have a great many more stories to write! and to share, if you feel like it!

laters!

miko ~_^

I am so sorry that you lost your epilogue, but I am "deliriously happy" with what you gave us. :-D I can't believe you had and kept all of that in your head! I am so very impressed with you, your writing and your story telling abilities. Thank you so much for sharing it all with us. I know what it's like when a huge story like this is done and you just need to sit back for a while, but I do hope you decide to write something again soon. I will be ready and waiting to read it.

Thank you from a huge fan,
HG4eva

OMG!!! what a wonderful end to a wonderful story. like i said before i am sad that the story is over, but i already reread it and will do so again and again. The epilogue was a great way to finish up the story. wow they all had great kidds and it in the end all was well. Great job!!! KUDOS!!!

I tried to keep up but it was rather long and i didn't care for all the couples. Mainly just Draco and hermione. There was some good dramatic parts like Neville and Millie's elopement and McGonagall's death.

Well, it's better than just leaving it, at least we know what happened. I can't tell you how often I've deleted or overwritten something, so you have my sympathy!

i love your story. i would really be happy if there was an epilog so i don't have to wonder what happened.

thats the END??!?!?! OMG i cannot believe that this wonderful story is over. Ever since I started reading it months ago, I fell in love with it. Its a great story and I am sad that its over. BUt i will reread it over and over. OOh please post the Epilogue soon. I need to know what happens with everyone in the end.
You are a great writer and this story was great!!! Kudos and hugs for you!!!

dont stop wrighting many people only want to review finneshed work and some people only read things that are finished you will probibly get a bunch of reviews in the 6 months after its finnished
then you have people like me who never review ::blushes:: but its not cuz i dont like it

I realy like the story and you could probibly make a second all about charlie and narsisa but at least finnish the first