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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
This has turned out to be a great story so far. I really hope to see more chapters soon. And I want Ms. Vain to get what is coming to her and I hope it is painful. Maybe a nice stay in Azkaban? Too much? I really can't stand people who are shallow and artificial. At least she was honest enough to say what she really wanted out of the marriage. But then to act like the abused victim really got my goat. So anyway I do hope you will continue to write and I hope to see more.
Later,
LadyO
This has turned out to be a great story so far. I really hope to see more chapters soon. And I want Ms. Vain to get what is coming to her and I hope it is painful. Maybe a nice stay in Azkaban? Too much? I really can't stand people who are shallow and artificial. At least she was honest enough to say what she really wanted out of the marriage. But then to act like the abused victim really got my goat. So anyway I do hope you will continue to write and I hope to see more.
Later,
LadyO
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked that quite a bit. I loved Luna and George's wedding. I do believe that Molly's reaction was a bit much. And Ron doesn't deserve a nice witch. Not at all. He needs some punishment.
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hope Ginny isn't hurt by his lack of reply.
Lovely though. Keep up the good work
Lovely though. Keep up the good work
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!! i'm really loving this fic!
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is great! please keep up the good work i cant wait to see how all the couples end up and as for the past few chapters, I think Ron didnt come close to getting what he really deserved. Thanks for writing great stuff!
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't revue much ,because my English is not very good!But i love this story and all the couples!
I love what you are doing with Neville and Millicent, and Alice Longbottom, And I trully hope Ron gets a very bad punishment! Please updated soon.
I love what you are doing with Neville and Millicent, and Alice Longbottom, And I trully hope Ron gets a very bad punishment! Please updated soon.
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I really like this story~! I only have ONE problem with it. It needs WAY more Draco Hermione moments. These last few chapters it has been nothing but Nevill/Millcent, Blaise/Ginny, George/Luna etc. but where is DRACO/HERMIONE?!?!?!?! I would love it WAY more if you had more Draco/Hermione moments, because it IS in the couple of Draco/Hermione. But don't think I don't like it, because I do. Other than the very little of DHr moments, I like the story~ Hope you update soon and have more DHr moment~!! ^^
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just noticed this update. I'm so happy for Neville. Millie is so good for him. And I can't believe that Augusta would be that horrible.
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awe !!!!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the better marriage law fics out there. I love how you have incorporated everyone's POV and used more of the little known characters. I am really impressed with this story and you have a wonderful writing style. Please keep up the good work, It is stories like yours that keep me wading through the crappy stories out there. Again, great job and I look forward to the next chapter.