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for Potions and Parchment Match

by chelleybelle

person jade
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! GREATEST ADD YET...ADD MORE PLEASE...
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally, Geez, I can't even tell you how much I had been waiting for more "action" if you get my point ;)
The story is brilliant and I like the plot, I really can't wait to see how everything will turn out. Don't worry about the amount of viewers - maybe it really wasn't enough smut for some, not enough DM/HG for others, but don't worry, please keep it up and never forget, this story is brilliant!
It's so sneaky that Ginny and Blaise are going at it at the wedding! You had me laughing out loud when it came to that *grins*
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dont change a thing it is awsome!
person SeayKat
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bored at all here! Just too...busy to write a review after I finish your chapters ;) Keep it up, PLEASE!!!
person mhaj78
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!! I don't why you're getting less reviews, but please don't let it discourage you. This chapter was a classic example of everything I love about this story--only I wish the super hot lustful scenes were DM/HG!! But...WOW. They were simply FANTASTIC!! I don't how you do it, but you balance all of these various story lines so well, none of them are shallow, you give us a good chunk on each coupling but still cover a lot of ground. Please keep up the good work--yours is one of only three I check this site for and I always get so excited when I see an update!
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
George and Luna! George and Luna! George and Luna! George and Luna! Please more George and Luna! I love this story! When I get on to check if my favs have been updated, this is one I always wish had a new chapter up.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is my first review left on this site.....
I have been thoroughly enjoying this story ever since you started posting chapters!!! Please don't lose faith due to the review volume.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah - more Draco/Hermione please - and more on Neville's mom and recovery!!! That might just be my favorite part next to the weasel incident....
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter. I am glad that Ron found someone that he likes. I hope that he and Maeve can become a couple. I am happy for George and Luna now that they are married and for Ginny and Blaise for finally being intimate. I can't wait to read more soon. This is a wonderful story.
person Utopia
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that your story is in any way, shape or form boring. I have one theory, and it applies to me too: most academic institutions at this time of year are expecting coursework and assignments to be handed in; as well as revision to be done; plus there's the *joy* of Xmas shopping and a thousand-and-one other things happening in November/December that keep people's time occupied.

Don't fret over your writing! You've noting to worry over.