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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a prank gone wrong...poor Molly. Ron just had it coming...Awesome chapter! Please update again soon!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee Hee Loved the prank! Glad to see this story moving again.
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAYYYY YOUR BACK!!!!!! honestly i might jus cry i so love this
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story but I'm wondering if you'll be updating anytime soon? Or is it temporarily on hiatus? Can you email me when you post the next chapter? Thanks!
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just sat here and read your entire story from beginning to where you're currently at. Only got three things to say. 1 - in the first chapter you used the incorrect spelling for vial. Vile i'm pretty sure refers to something that is unpleasant or disgusting. 2 - a couple of chapters later you spelt lewd as lude. I'm only bitching 'cos it took me a few minutes to puzzle out what the word was meant to be.
And finally 3 - wehn are you going to finish this story?????
I find this to be a very enjoyable interpretation of the whole marriage law concept. It is different for you to also focus on the relationships of the friends surrounding Hermione and Draco. I think you have done a wonderful job in bringing complex characters to beleiveable life. I especially enjoy how much you have turned Ron into such a pathetic whinger (I never liked him in canon either. Such a selfish prat) who is obviously not gonna grow up anytime soon.
I know I've criticised you at the beginning of this review, and although it seems petty it's intended to be constructive. Other than a few little grammatical and spelling errors, I really enjoy your story, so don't stop writing because of me. :)
And finally 3 - wehn are you going to finish this story?????
I find this to be a very enjoyable interpretation of the whole marriage law concept. It is different for you to also focus on the relationships of the friends surrounding Hermione and Draco. I think you have done a wonderful job in bringing complex characters to beleiveable life. I especially enjoy how much you have turned Ron into such a pathetic whinger (I never liked him in canon either. Such a selfish prat) who is obviously not gonna grow up anytime soon.
I know I've criticised you at the beginning of this review, and although it seems petty it's intended to be constructive. Other than a few little grammatical and spelling errors, I really enjoy your story, so don't stop writing because of me. :)
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! you havent given up have you? :( well last chapter you asked for our opinions and if that helps you :) I loved this story so far, but im missing a bit more hermione draco time or whatever :P just continued what you were doing and you're going to be fine :)
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So much fun! Great read! I personally would very much enjoy more D/H smut, but that's me. I wonder if I could trouble you to email me for updates? Thanks!
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chpt 11 - SINCE WHEN DOES GEORGE HAVE A DAUGHTER??????? BLAAAAH!!
Chpt 12
Chpt 12
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I really wish you would continue it.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chpt 1 - omg... aah I like this idea too!!
~Spiritxx
~Spiritxx