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for Potions and Parchment Match

by chelleybelle

person lily69
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, since you're taking requests...I absolutely LOVE the Harry/Pansy pairing (wish there was more of it in fandom). Please, please a steamy hot make up scene with them would be awesome! (Think rough and rowdy Klingon type sex with each of them maneuvering for dominance!)

Beyond that, let's see...I'd like to see Molly admit what a git her son is and exhonerate (sp?) Harry from her blame. Seeing Neville and his mother connecting would be satisfying.

And, of course, very big and beautiful weddings for Hermione/Draco, Harry/Pansy and Blaise/Ginny.

This is such a fun story! Thanks for writing!
person mlui
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you said this story is one of everyone, but if you can add more Draco/Hermione--that would be excellent! Dr/H is my favourite pairing. =)
person genna
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want Ron Weasleey to have a good end. Maybe he did cuss out Mom and Dad, while he is finding his way he might resort to ignorant behavior. When he is out in the world by himself, Ron will see the world and all its possibilities for what it is: frighteningly unfamiliar.

As for Blaise, Luna, or any of the rest...I am sure it will work out.
person Diana
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think i have reviewed this story before but i want to tell you that i love it so far and i am very excited to what is to come. one thing i don't like what i read in other stories is if there is an only child. and with draco and hermione i really like them having a boy first then a girl. i love all the couples you put together. i like it when there is a little drama but if the couple has a fight that they make up in the end. please don't have any of the couples separate. i think you should just get rid of ron and have him move away and not be apart of the story because he is pissing me off. i think that is all the things i have to suggest. can't wait to read the rest of your story.
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAY!!! 2 chapters a week?! I LOVE YOU!!! YAY!! :D :D :D
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Done. I'm hooked!
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh my goodness, that was great! Poor Ginny and Blaise, I've been in their shoes! Loved it, can't wait for more!
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person LunaGrrl
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes it was terribly short, but as a writer myself I understand that sometimes, despite our wants and wishes that we absolutely MUST do what is best for the overall story. So while short it was still very entertaining. I hope that you will be posting another chapter very soon. Keep up the good work and keep writting. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you very soon!!!

~Luna
person Missy
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, i've been following this story for a while. I do wish the focus would be on Hermione and Draco more, i mean after all, it is their category, but other than that i love it