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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O M G!!!!!!!!!!
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January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovin' it to pieces!!!
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December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a ridiculously cute story and even if I felt it jumped the shark here and there it was a great read I couldn't stop from finishing it in less than a day.
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am so happy for charlie and narcissa. i loved the story but i am a little bit upset that we didn't get the chapter. i hope you will begin a new story.
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY, i finally got the chance to finish it. AWESOME SUCH A GREAT ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep writing on your stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say from chapter 37 onwards this fic got disappointing. You mentioned that it seemed like no one was interested in the fic anymore perhaps it's because it's close to a year since chapter 35 was posted. It felt to me like you were just rushing to get this out of the way.
My main question is where was Molly's comeuppance? You mentioned in an authors note one time that she was going to get a surprise and be jolted about. If it was McGonagall's death, well there wasn't alot of Molly mention after that happened.
Despite my above criticisms, thankyou for completing the story. I hate it when people just abandon them and never finish them. I did really enjoy reading this and I was very happy to find the fic completed when I logged on tonight. (I rarely get to use a computer and so I always check the fics I'm reading for updates. I hadn't checked on this one since the beginning of April)
Keep on writing, you can spell and put sentences together so it would be nice to have more of your writing to read.
The first part of this review isn't meant meanly or as a flame, I just wanted you to know how I felt. I babble alot.
Neway thanks for this fic, overall I really enjoyed it. :)
My main question is where was Molly's comeuppance? You mentioned in an authors note one time that she was going to get a surprise and be jolted about. If it was McGonagall's death, well there wasn't alot of Molly mention after that happened.
Despite my above criticisms, thankyou for completing the story. I hate it when people just abandon them and never finish them. I did really enjoy reading this and I was very happy to find the fic completed when I logged on tonight. (I rarely get to use a computer and so I always check the fics I'm reading for updates. I hadn't checked on this one since the beginning of April)
Keep on writing, you can spell and put sentences together so it would be nice to have more of your writing to read.
The first part of this review isn't meant meanly or as a flame, I just wanted you to know how I felt. I babble alot.
Neway thanks for this fic, overall I really enjoyed it. :)
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that I enjoyed this story so much I basically read it from beginning to end in almost one sitting. That's right! All of it. Now my eyes hurt like hell. Hope you're happy. J/king! But seriously, great story.
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I'm so sorry you saved over the epilogue...but thank you for updating what you did. I absolutely fell in love with the George/Luna pairing..and that's odd for me as I'm strictly Dramione or DM/HP. I would suggest a separate fic for each of the prominent pairs...but that might be a huge undertaking plus highly selfish of myself.
Just keep doing what you're doing and I'll read what you post. And if you're ever looking for a beta, you know where to find me. :P
Just keep doing what you're doing and I'll read what you post. And if you're ever looking for a beta, you know where to find me. :P
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. It was fluffy but not overly fluffy, with the right amount of angst. It sucks you wrote over your epilogue, but you managed to make the epilogue work. FANTASTIC job.
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was freaking awesome. i stayed up all night reading all 40+ chapters, keep up the good work.