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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH!!! it's so great you'll keep writing I love it well the prank of the twins had my best friend and me pissing from laughter, and well I'm dying to know how is the Potter's castle and who is the match for Narcissa (I been scratching my brain for the answer and nothing has come up) so great chapters, take care and update soon!
Love
Lola
Love
Lola
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is cruel. Tell us who it is.
Lupin was my first guess. You say no to him and Kingsley.
How about Charlie Weasley?
Dumbledore is gay and too old for her.
Lupin was my first guess. You say no to him and Kingsley.
How about Charlie Weasley?
Dumbledore is gay and too old for her.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do NOT tell me it is Xeno Lovegood. Because I re-read this tory, and the only person I can think of who would be available, if not dead, would be Xeno. And I'm pretty sure then I would understand Narcissa's reaction. Not to mention the build-up to this moment. Also you said it wasn't someone she's been with in other stories if I remember correctly. And NO ONE has put her with him.
Wow, if I'm right I shall be stunned.
Wow, if I'm right I shall be stunned.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so it is not kingsley... hmmmm think outside of the box... percy
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, new guess for Narcissa's mate... Cygnatius Bulstrode, mainly because no one's mentioned him yet, lol.
Xeno Lovegood does seem to be the more obvious choice. Not to mention, one to make Narcissa grow pale.
I suppose Charlie Weasley would be doable, as he hasn't been in Britain to take the test for himself. Still, he's only about seven years older than Draco, which by my guess makes him at least twelve years younger than Narcissa, possibly more than that.
Xeno Lovegood does seem to be the more obvious choice. Not to mention, one to make Narcissa grow pale.
I suppose Charlie Weasley would be doable, as he hasn't been in Britain to take the test for himself. Still, he's only about seven years older than Draco, which by my guess makes him at least twelve years younger than Narcissa, possibly more than that.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
let's see...i don't think Charlie was matched or Hagrid. Hm...i wonder what about dumbledore? ewww....
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to say Sirius, but I can't remember if you had him dead or not lol. I think he's dead because Harry is the heir and Arthur went with him to meet and discuss Pansy's dowary. Other than that, my mind is drawing a blank lol. It's a wonderful story though.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh please I want to know I think that's Lupin or is he dead I don't know really but I am
dying to know
dying to know
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok someone said not Lupin and you said to then sorry for that review then I think
Xeno but I hope not
please let it be Charlie Weasley he is cool
Xeno but I hope not
please let it be Charlie Weasley he is cool
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have stated that you are too lazy to fix the numerous errors in this fic, and that is your choice although I find it a bit odd. However, there are three errors that are just beyond the pale. You have misspelled the names of three canon characters, and those should be corrected. 1)His name is Blaise Zabini, no M. 2) Her name is Romilda Vane, not Vain. 3) Her name is Augusta Longbottom, not Augustus.
You should get a beta, and if you cannot find one, you should perhaps find out what a homophone is.
You should get a beta, and if you cannot find one, you should perhaps find out what a homophone is.