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for Potions and Parchment Match

by chelleybelle

person genna
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It can't be Arthur Weasely!

Who else is already married?
person kazfeist
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a cliffie! Even if your muse has gone, you're telling a great story, hon! :D
person SnapesCello
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chelleybelle,

I hate to say it but this story has me almost as captivated as the originals... ... I know, I know but really this is a completely different level. It is like the Adults Only Harry Potter I always wanted to read!!! You are doing such an amazing job and I am so glad that you were coerced into picking this story up again. Your writing style would have been hard to duplicate. YOu know how to draw the reader in and make us hang on your every word. <<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>> Cant wait for the next next chap. I am dying to know who Narcissa's match is. thanks
person Steph
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You have to update soon! Your story is absolutely fantastic

Steph
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww awesome chapter!!! wait shes pregnant??? oooh no not good..cannot wait to read more!!!!
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the part where ginny and blaise got away from mrs weasley

Neveille and his mom was perfect. And the part with finding out who her match is, that was mean. Until next time.
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg! i had a feeling Hermione would be pregnant... hmm... interesting! can't wait to see what happens next!
person Anika Kitty
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i agree with you if he doesnt want to read them then he doesnt have to...but keep in mind that he might just be sadistic and finds pleasure in hurting or pissing people off so just ignore it...and ya flaming is besides the point if they dont wanna finish move on! thats what i do...and as for your story your driving us all up the wall here!! but i gotta give you props for being able to write that whole thing with out a slip of a name! not many can do that! so props and kudos!! and like the rest i kinda wanna say it could be arthur or bill since he was already married but then i think that by talking about arthur wanting to see for himself who his soul mate was is your way of taking the hint off of the real person....and i think it might be possible that you were talking about Narcissa being married when Hermione asked Kingsly...and ya the fact that the person didnt know means that 1)they are married and not expected to take the test 2)they were out of the country and not expected to take the test or 3)like Narcissa, were married, became divorced or widowed, has grown up children already and were not expected to take the test....and i think that for the whole Molly learning her lesson soon will probably be Ron's doing not Arthur's marriage to another woman...and ya i cant think of anything else to say beyond: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! IM DYING TO KNOW WHO IT IS AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!!...*falls over* im dead!...ok maybe not but still!
person Anika Kitty
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok...first off....OH MY GOD!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!! WHAT THE HELL!!! *cough* now that that is out of my system i give you kudos for having us all jumping up and down thinking we are gonna know who her match was and then poof! you prove us wrong by leaving a cliff hanger...i just gotta say thats ouch...but cool i would soo do it too ^_^ many props and kudos! cant wait till the next one ^_^
person smmz79
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHH omg not another cliffie.... but it is fun to think ok she is gonna tell us then you don't it is kind of funny.... ok so i loved luna with fred and angelina esp when she made the comment about fred looking good naked bc she knows what george looks like... yummy scene with blaise and ginny!!!! great job!!!!