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Now, if Molly was not such an overbearing busybody, it would have turned out to be a prank, as intended. She always has to stick her nose in and made it a big production AND his friends and family who know the real him, should not feel guilty. If it was done to someone else, Ron would probably hold them down for them. I am dreading Neville's grandmother. Reading on...p

I think that I would be angry with Luna if I was George. It is not like he is the only one telling how Molly was acting. Yet it looked like she wanted him caught. I wish someone would stand up to her the way Neville stood up to Millie's father. Hate to say it, but Ron is the only one who has shown any backbone where his parents are concerned. Very uncharacteristic. I am sure that will be Fred and George's faults that he left instead of Ron being sick of her and his dad. Please don't let her get away with putting the guilt off on them without someone calling her on it. p

I love Harry so rarely think he is just plain wrong. I think that he was in this case though. Too bad those people don't all realize that Ron is the way he is because no one holds him accountable. They make excuses for him and just pretend he was not being a jerk when he finally comes around each time...disgusting! And Pansy said exactly what I have always thought, which hopefully made Harry think (I doubt it mind you because he would have to lay blame with Ron, and Ron is always blameless. Love Millie and think that she is just the advocate that Neville and his mom need. RV is getting scary though and I am afraid that she is going to hurt someone he loves. p

Beautiful. Luna is one of my favorite characters. She is so kind and gentle. Love that you have George recognize that. p

just to say i love the story i love marrige law fanfics and this is one of my favourites but i have to point it out its ZABINI not ZAMBINI sorry but it has been bugging me for the past few chapters...

Amazing!!! Loved it, but I wanted so much more :) keep writing one of the better written fanfics I have read!!! :)

667 reviews!!!!

Love your story.. keeps me in suspense to know what happens next. Awesome grammar !! Good Job

A cute story.. Good concept overall. I enjoyed it a lot

Hey,

I love the story but I'm a little confused about a couple of things. Why did you start referring to Blaise as Blaise Zambini? His last name is Zabini, without the 'M', and for the first half of the story, you were using Zabini, so it's confusing that you keep switching. Also, I just wanted to point out that at when Hermione's Parents have their initial 'meeting' with McGonagall, Hermione's mother calls her father 'Jim', but then when they go to dinner, he's introduced as 'Ted', so you may need t fix that up. But overall, really great story and I'm enjoying it. Keep it up!!