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by chelleybelle

schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NO Draco no Hermione!!!!!!!!! :(..... that is ok .. I hope the next is another good and long like this.......
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I will admit I had no idea how you were going to tie everything up in only one chapter, so I'm thrilled about getting another. As much as I want to know about Hermione and Draco's happy ending, there's another couple that has captured my heart even more. Narcissa's fear is so touching. I can't wait to see her let herself be happy. And, something tells me the Weasley genes will win out anyway. lol Thank you!!
person Tenar10r
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More! More!
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i cant believe how many chapters u wrote :) and they way u wrote about every charator and not just concentrate on 1 or 2 people was a great idea and it paid off well
ignore the people that write bad reviews they dont know wht they r talking about
ur good writer an u have a great imagination
love this sorry ALOTTTTT
:)
MWAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Jenn
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! This story is amazing. It's so good and I'm loving it. I love all the pairings that you came up with they're great. I'm definately enjoying reading it. It's kept my attention from the beginning and as I read I found myself laughing out loud...its so funny! I hope you don't mind that I didn't review every chapter...cuz I read all the way to this chapter and that would be a lot of reviews and I just wanted to keep reading till i couldn't anymore :D Poor Professor McGonagall! Not cool :( I hope Ron gets his head on straight soon...what a jerk lol. OH I so love that you added Charlie to the story! Hehe I love that he got paired with Narcissa and I can't wait to see what happens with them. Anyway I just had to rave a little about this story because it's so good! I hope you update soon :D Keep up the good work!
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I did notice two minor mistakes, though. You wrote Carrolls, it should have been Carrows. Also, when Neville and Millie were talking, you had Neville saying that Millie killed Professor McGonagall, when you should have said that Romilda killed her. I look forward to the next chapter. Since you are wrapping it up, I hope that you write about Severus getting married and having a family, plus Charlie and Narcissa. I also think that Ron and Kim should get married.
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow what a chapter.. soo full of info.. but i rememeber how u said a while ago that you will combine the chapters to end the story qickly...
I love this story. its GREAT!! you are doing a wonderful job with it and I will definitely reread it again and again. much KUDOS to you!!!
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schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.
person istarbel
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! your story is so good
i started reading yesterday and couldnt stop I so want to know whats next!!!
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, That was a shocking turn of events. I was really hoping that the curse was too weak and she was only knocked out. Poor Draco and Hermione. I am so thankful that you updated this story. I am sitting on the edge of my seat to read more so I am adding my review to the rest in hopes that it will inspire you to post another chapter quickly. Thanks again for updating!