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This story was also a very good read. I enjoyed this very much and also read it in a day.

Brilliant work. I read quite enough, but I had to read your story without a break...really wonderful.

It was beyond worth wading through 47 pages and coming across this story. It is everything i have ever wanted in a post harry potter fanfiction, and written brilliantly. The suspensful cliff-hangers! I couldnt put it down. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this!

I am so sad i reached the end of this story lolol. Like mourning a friend of something xD

nicely done

You are right. Nobody can force anyone to read something you don't like. And you gave yourself into temptation, so like it is obvius that you were trying to stretch to no end this lovely story, I, who don't read works in progress, decide today, after three days reading your story, that isn't worth it go through the next chapters and read it complete.
From saucy, sexy, funny turned into annoying, cheesy and an effort, not a joy to read it.
And your tantrum from the begginning of this chapter? What, are you four? Or did you just merge with the Ron or the Romilda of the last three chapters?.Sorry, I think you just screwed it.

First, I am sorry to say that I tried to review some chapters and the site would not let me. This is the happiest part of your story, although there were many other happy parts, I love this best. It would be nice to see how everyone else celebrates her recovery, but that has not really been spoken of outside of Neville and Millie, so don't expect it. Also love that Kim kept to her original and did not create problems where there were none. Great!! p

Excellent! You left out Alice though. She could have gotten together with old friends for grandchildren playdates and come to adore Millie for bringing her family into a real family once again. Grandma could have come around and visited Frank with Alice or Neville and quit being such a biddy (nah, that would not have been realistic). I was surprised that no one named their kids after Minerva, but brought honoring men into it...wizard driven society back then. Anyway, loved your story. A very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p

Boy, Neville's grandmother really is a biddy. If the opportunity for her son to get better existed, she would probably leave no stone unturned. Hopefully, grandma will "bite the big one" and Neville and Millie will take care of getting his mom therapy and she can be back in their lives. Great story so far. p

A very Happy Christmas for NL, but I bet old grandma is going to have a cow. Maybe they can slip some sedation into her tea and she can keep her son company for 15 or 16 years. I love all of the couples you have put into place. Great. p