AFF Fiction Portal
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was trying to think of what to say to convey what your story made me feel and the only thing I could think of was... OH MY GOD! I SO FUCKING LOVED IT! more More MORE!!!!!!! (by the way... this is my first review on this site. So congratulations, I will definately be reviewing more often!
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn! This is a hot story! I love it. But then again, I am a sucker for Sev/Herm Dom/sub stories. Great writing too. Keep it up.
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, such a good story! lucky Hermione. I have to say that is the best kind of gift!

can't wait to see what tricks Snape has up his sleeve next! Already looking forward to more smutty goodness.
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Ele
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naughty, naughty... :D But I like it and am eager to read more! I'm usually more into complex plots and waiting until chapter 99 to see anything explicit but this is really nice for a change...
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I hope your beta continues to send updates!
person Jen618
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yum. Was she play-acting the naivete? I hope so, and it fits in with the scenario. Great work.
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
It was wonderful.
person snape7
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my.. that was fucking hot! love the story <3
person Jen618
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tee hee. I hadn't read your reviews before! LMFAO. Sorry, had to get that word soemwhere into my review. I like the way you used the OC , it's kind of real to life. There are some scary people out there, arent there??