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schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I really like this story!! I love plots where Severus has two sides and acts irrationally.. LOVE IT and I hope you update soon..
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great but sad chapter. I can't believe that Severus could be that cruel to Hermione. I hope that she will be alright. Maybe Minerva can try and help them. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omigod! I need more! right now! I assume she's pregnant?! Arghhh! I can't wait for you to update - I'm going insane here! *chants* MORE! MORE! MORE!
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. I absolutely love the way he tried to manipulate her,but is finding himself losing control. This is a wonderful fic and I hope you will update soon.
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this, please keep updating.
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I hope that Minerva doesn't do anything to get them in trouble. I can't believe that Severus would just leave the way he did. I look forward to reading more. Please update again soon.
person angua
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As I said, I
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So hot! I loved this last chapter. Excellent story.
person onduril
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I just read your story and I must say that I'm positively surprised. I thought it merely to be a PWP but you managed to make it more. There are still a lot of lemons, which I really like, but also a plot and I can't wait to read more.*gg*
Keep it up...please...