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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the snow globe idea.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OoO! An update! ^____^ Loved it and anxiously awaiting more.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!!!
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh! I'm really liking this story. Enough lemons to make it satisfying but then a nice plot behind it all to ensure that it all ends rather nicely.
And you are forgiven for the grammar errors that I mentioned in the last one. Didn't realise that English wasn't your first language. Then I will say, as English being my first language, that aside from a few incorrect usages of words or two many words in a sentence, you used a few verb cases that not many English-speaking people would know to use because it is something that doesn't get taught properly. I.e. The Subjunctive case - "If I were to do......" as you have written or similar anyway, whereas a lot of people use "If I was to .....", which is incorrect.
But I'm very much looking forward to reading what happens next. A quick question, are your betas naturalised English speakers or have they just been able to learn it very well? I say this because a natural-born English speaker will pick up on errors much easier than someone who isn't.
Anyway, I'm loving the story and best of luck in completing it. I know how hard it is to keep writing stories and I can empathise with you on the pressure that a lot of readers are putting on you to finish it.
~ Sam.
And you are forgiven for the grammar errors that I mentioned in the last one. Didn't realise that English wasn't your first language. Then I will say, as English being my first language, that aside from a few incorrect usages of words or two many words in a sentence, you used a few verb cases that not many English-speaking people would know to use because it is something that doesn't get taught properly. I.e. The Subjunctive case - "If I were to do......" as you have written or similar anyway, whereas a lot of people use "If I was to .....", which is incorrect.
But I'm very much looking forward to reading what happens next. A quick question, are your betas naturalised English speakers or have they just been able to learn it very well? I say this because a natural-born English speaker will pick up on errors much easier than someone who isn't.
Anyway, I'm loving the story and best of luck in completing it. I know how hard it is to keep writing stories and I can empathise with you on the pressure that a lot of readers are putting on you to finish it.
~ Sam.
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, just brilliant! I can't wait to read more and more and more and more...
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohwow. Great chapter. Cannotw ait fo rmore
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just got into this story and find it captivating. Your english is great-you can't tell it's not your first language. I hope the next chapter comes soon!!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! I very much loved the part with the three of them invisible in the hospital wing; i'm still laughing about that! ^___^
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I hope that Albus, Minerva, and Poppy, along with Hermione can convince Severus that he will be a great father. I don't think Hermione could ever get rid of the baby. I can't wait to read more soon.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG you're BACK!!
I've missed this story, and am so happy to hear that you'll be around more often... though sad to hear the story will end before the new year. I guess we all silently pray that these stories never end.
Brilliant chapter as always!!
Sari
I've missed this story, and am so happy to hear that you'll be around more often... though sad to hear the story will end before the new year. I guess we all silently pray that these stories never end.
Brilliant chapter as always!!
Sari