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schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Although I think Albus was wrong to imprison both of them, I am glad that they talked to each other. I hope that they do raise the baby together. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Myrna
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow; you really did a good job! Severus is totally himself! Cause, you know, in many stories with this pairing, Snape is a bit out of character. But you did it wonderfuly and I really loved it. Cannot wait to the next chapter! :)
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL...Okay, so I kind of agree. It was a bit disjointed, this chapter, but I get the point you were trying to get across and I love your story so much. *sigh* I'm in the same boat, updating rarely due to being so busy in my life. Oh well, good luck to the both of us. Thank you for the fabulous update.
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter to read, but it hurt at the same time. I could almost feel what it was like for Hermione thinking that Severus hated her and the babe. I though that I was going to start to cry! Great job and please keep writing.
person Queeny
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be mean and say, When did Hermione have Flippers to look at? :]

I liked it and am looking forward to more.
person carha
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!! total cliffhanger. Please update soon!!!
person areader
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought I should chime in as I'm half-way through digesting your story that, while your "lemons" are very tasty, I am really enjoying the psychological aspects of what you're writing. I'm a bit disturbed by how submissive Hermione is allowing herself to be, but hey, we know that that happens. In the chapter I just read, she started to take some initiative, but chickened out. I'm interested to see where this goes. Have a few chapters left to read :)
person areader
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well now, the snow globe was a twist!
person Queeny
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's getting super deep. O:
I really like it though. But Siigh. Severus, why deny yourself happiness?