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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am just curious why this is in the male/female section if the apparent main pairing will be Harry and Draco? The first two chapters are well written though I do not think I will be continuing to read this story as I do not like fanfics that take the characters so far out of character. Like I said though despite my dislike for this type of fanfic you have written the first two chapters well.
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay. so i love the story idea, but one small critique. don't have the paragraphs as long as you have them, it makes it harder to read. also, when different people are speaking, show that in a different paragraph. other than that, i'm loving it and can't wait fro the next chapter!
~sparky
~sparky
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its pretty good!