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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed it so far. Really hope there is more to come. Keep up the good work.
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story PLZ update soon
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. It could use more careful proofreading. There are a number of mispellings, etc (e.g., lead for let). But also at times you use the wrong names. For example, in the first scene with Harry meeting with Isabelle at night, you have Hermione saying something to Isabelle -- she wasn't even there -- when apparently you meant Harry. Also you mix up pronouns, using he when you mean not Harry but the female Harry was with. But the story line is very appealing.
Now, let me guess, the missing child that Serena Snape had (with Sirius) is none other than Isabelle Malfoy (who, as has been pointed out repeatedly in the story, does not fit the Malfoy family at all).
Now, let me guess, the missing child that Serena Snape had (with Sirius) is none other than Isabelle Malfoy (who, as has been pointed out repeatedly in the story, does not fit the Malfoy family at all).
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story, please continue to update!!! i've never read a more original fanfic!!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ISABELLE IS SERENA AND SIRIUS'S DAUGHTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I JUST KNOW IT!!!!
*calms down a bit*
Okay, let's take stock here. Isi doesn't look a spot like a Malfoy, nor does she act like one. When Rena was killed, she'd given birth shortly beforehand. There was no evidence that the baby was killed, and who else was there? Right. Malfoy. Old Voldywart wouldn't concern himself with a traitorbabe and as I said, Isi doesn't look anything like Malfoy. Perhaps the fact that she and Drano Malformed were born at around the same time were good... er, what's the word... reasons? Territories? Good whatevers to say that they were twins.
I know this has to be it. And I'm also gonna guess that maybe Isi can be with Harry after all. After all, she is bound by the will of her father and if my earlier assumptions are right and if Lucius Dickwad didn't perform a blood binding on the girl, then her father's will is Sirius's. I guess we won't know till the poor beauty is sixteen and/or forced to obey Lucius in the marriage department. I just hope I'm right. Am I?
*giggles* Ron is a dweeb. He's making me sick! *throws up all over Ron's Nimbus*
Heh.
Loves,
Arwen_Evenstar
ficchantress1218@gmail.com
PS. Oh, sorry, I got so caught up in my musings and assumptions that I completely forgot to give you tight hugs and to tell you that your story is freaking incredible. I love it and I hope you continue it soon. You are truly a jewel among authoresses and I support you 100%.
*tight hugs and friendly kiss on cheek*
You keep up the incredible work, hun. You're doing great!
*calms down a bit*
Okay, let's take stock here. Isi doesn't look a spot like a Malfoy, nor does she act like one. When Rena was killed, she'd given birth shortly beforehand. There was no evidence that the baby was killed, and who else was there? Right. Malfoy. Old Voldywart wouldn't concern himself with a traitorbabe and as I said, Isi doesn't look anything like Malfoy. Perhaps the fact that she and Drano Malformed were born at around the same time were good... er, what's the word... reasons? Territories? Good whatevers to say that they were twins.
I know this has to be it. And I'm also gonna guess that maybe Isi can be with Harry after all. After all, she is bound by the will of her father and if my earlier assumptions are right and if Lucius Dickwad didn't perform a blood binding on the girl, then her father's will is Sirius's. I guess we won't know till the poor beauty is sixteen and/or forced to obey Lucius in the marriage department. I just hope I'm right. Am I?
*giggles* Ron is a dweeb. He's making me sick! *throws up all over Ron's Nimbus*
Heh.
Loves,
Arwen_Evenstar
ficchantress1218@gmail.com
PS. Oh, sorry, I got so caught up in my musings and assumptions that I completely forgot to give you tight hugs and to tell you that your story is freaking incredible. I love it and I hope you continue it soon. You are truly a jewel among authoresses and I support you 100%.
*tight hugs and friendly kiss on cheek*
You keep up the incredible work, hun. You're doing great!
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good writing, too bad people here are just interested in porn...
you should write your own book...
you should write your own book...
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright, through this chapter I know what is going to happen. Isabel is really Sirius' daughter which Malfoy took in for Voldemort, that's why he dosen't like her, it also explains why she's in Gryfindor. It all makes sence, you kind of gave it away in this chapter, all that has to happen is for Harry to find out, they go through the legal channels, have the wizarding equivalent of a DNA test and viola. Malfoy then has no power over her and can't make her marry, it also means that she's not really a Malfoy so no one will care when she and Harry get together. You don't have to tell me if I'll right but I would appreciate it, though if you don't I guess I'll have to find out later, if you finnish that is.
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Terrific fic. I am kinda bummed that it replaces Order of the Pheonix, but so far in this mans opinion it is leaps and bounds more entertaining than Half Blood Prince or Deathly Hollows.
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most original fics I have read in a long time. Well done on your story