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for Silencio

by AkashaTheKitty

person Jenny
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was incredibly amazing.

I normally don't review on completed fics (hahhahaha, bad reviewing ethic :P) but I just had to for this story
person carlie
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, so this is me crying.
i love you and hate you at the same time.
damn.
you really are good. =]
person gypsycarmen
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i smell a sequal
because you sly thing the last they were together was outside not under the nonconceaving charm of the school........................am i right di i get a cookie or mabey an epiloge
pleeeeeeeeeeeeease
person jane
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing! i mean it truly.

albeit a twist, but one that had been alluded to throughout the story, although the fact that he hid himself from being a deatheater to her was a great turn in events. i cried, i smiled and i dreamed through every point in this story, i was truly captivating. my heart ached for hermione at the end and draco proved how much he really loved her. i can't wait to read more from you.

you're a talent.
person Michelle
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, one of the best stories I have ever read. Sure, the ending was not conventional, but then again, the best stories never had conventional endings. Apart from fairy tales... they show you the unreal side of life.
person Gallivant
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story. Beautifully written and very engaging throughout. Sad as it was - albeit inevitable - the ending was appropriate at this stage. However, there is so much potential for a sequel; one that could be set at the close of Book 7 (perhaps with Draco's reflections on the events of Book 7) or even, dare I say it, post-Epilogue ... because, let's face it, it's hard to imagine Draco ever forgetting his experiences with Hermione, clearly his first love. And it would be incredibly exciting if Hermione was to somehow 'recall' HER first love at an inopportune moment in later life. It's irresistible! Please, please pen a sequel. And thanks again for Silencio - it was thrilling, moving, compelling and, ultimately, heart-breaking.
person Draconas
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cry* I haven't reviewed... I'm a bad person. But I really, really loved this story.
person jan
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story. It's good to see Malfoy as (at the very least) a noble prat. Good job.
person ocard
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, so i read this entire fic front to back (so to speak), and i am literally crying right now! TEARS ARE STREAMING DOWN MY FACE, DAMMIT, AND IT'S CUZ OF YOUR AMAZING, GOD-FORSAKEN WRITING!!!! my heart literally clenched when hermione threw the bottle, and draco's attitude as she was walking away... oh my god i can barely type this thing!!!
ok, im better now. that was a brilliant story, and it was extraordinarily well written. i havent been on this site in a while, and 'silencio' is the first fic i read... *SOB* i loved how you incorporated different scenarios from the book into the fic... it made the story that much more believable. i will most definitely be anticipating a sequel...PLEASE =,[

most faithfully yours
ocard
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I need it. I NEED A SEQUEL! I need it.
The end was a stroke of genius I must admit, but it was TOO SAD! You MUST write a sequel!
This was one of the few Draco/Hermione I was reading because it really captivated me :) I loved the story, even the ending.... but I'd really, really, really like a sequel. :) Please?