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So...I literally was crying through the whole scene of Draco removing Hermione's memories.

Bravo.

Any story that can get me to practically ball and feel like I'm the one dying deserves...hell if I know. But it deserves something. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I would not say that I wanted to give the monitor a finger. I wouldn't even say that I was surprised. I will say that it was my hope that Draco would let Hermione figure it out, but Hermione wasn't necessarily trying to take the lead in this story. All in all, it was a good story. I am waiting for the follow up.

I read this story through Chapter 14 in October. I came back and read from 1-8 and skipped to 14. I am glad I re-read it before I got to the ending this time. I have read so much DH now that I want you to take all the time you need to do it fresh and funky however it begins again or it ends the next time. I can promise that as long as you write, I will continue to be a dedicated reader.

I pray you have all the creative fervor it takes for you to begin again and finish with as much flourish. I ask that you make Draco as ruthless in the next one as this one and Hermione three steps ahead of anything he brings.

Genna

was that really the end? of course there must be a sequel... anyway i congratulate you for writing this very very irrisistable but heart-renching fic. you, lady kitty, had just ruined my mood to happily study. i have a long exam in physics on monday for god's sake! (for my sake, i mean). but you really made a very convincing plot. i salute you for that. but for now i'll be putting a hard time from restraining on thinking about it too much. could you give me some of that potions that hermione drunk? i could use some, you know. oh, draco, why do you have break your own and hermione's heart? there's a sequel, right? i read you mentioned it... so looking forward to it. hey, did i forget to mention that i you deserve that award you mentioned?

where is the sequel!? you left me hanging and heart broken here. you really have to write a sequel and i'm really hanging into your every word that you will indeed write it... i'll be hanging around for this certain fic, that's an oath... so much for hanging...

Yeah well done Im really pleased you won. I voted for you and contrast and im very please to see it was a first and second.

Okay....first let me say WOW...this was an absolutely amazing story. I have to be honest...I read this story two days ago and it took me a while to review because I was so stunned. I am a sucker for happy endings and this story absolutely broke my heart. I didn't review because I didn't know what I would say, but after two days, I can't stop thinking about your story. I read a lot of fan fiction, and you story has by far had the most effect on me. Even today my heart still breaks for both Hermione and Draco. You are an amazing writer. Few fan fics have captured my heart as this one has. Well done, and please keep writing! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Hey, here is what I think. I'll try not to candy coat it, because I believe in telling it like it is.

She's being bitch.
WAY too bitchy. They both need a little time, and talk. I know it sounds corny, but just a LITTLE would suffice. I don't remember Hermione having this much of a temper. If this is how it's suppose to be then CONGRATS! But if it's not then...well...you have my imput.

-Houndog

I just have to ask, when are you going to start on the sequel. I read this whole story in one sitting. It took me a few hours because people kept bothering nd interrupting me but I couldn't stop reading, I read until 1AM this morning and the last time I stayed up reading that late I was reading the HP series itself. I loved it, I need more!!! You're such a good writer. I was going to start "You changed my mind" but I'm afraid if I start, I won't be able to stop. You must start the sequel soon!

You so have to write a sequel... xxxx great story

so she's a swallower hahaha seriously this chapter was so erotic i think we all have been there before and this chapter made it seem so erotic like it is in real life