rate_review Reviews

Reading this story I find myself sighing and saying "not again" This basic plot has been done so many times. The details vary of course but in the end it's really just the same story. For once it would be nice to have a story where Malfoy accosts Hermione and she basically makes mincemeat of him. I know that wouldn't fit in with the whole domination/submission bondage perversion so many D/Hr shippers get off on but it would at least be different.

I really think that you portray the characters accurately in this, which is seems to be *really* hard for people to do in Draco's case. So kudos! It's also refreshing to see accurate spelling and grammar in a fic, especially a one-shot. If you're up for writing a sequel or any other HP fics, I'd definitely check them out. As I said, I think you've got the portrayal of Draco down pretty much perfectly, and there's a lot you could do with it.

Can this so not be a one shot? Can we have a story? Pleeeasseee! I loved your writing style (I laughed at parts and was on edge at others!) and the way you worked this story. I would love to see him break down even more lol. Really bravo to what you've written! If you write more I promise to review and rate every chapter!

You sooo need to make this a couple of more chapaters long!!

I do hope you will write more to this story--its GREAT!!!!

Hey, not bad..wish it was longer with more chapters...you're a pretty good writer..you should continue this..