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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this story has come along so nicely. My editing suggestions really couldn't have helped much if it hadn't had been so good to begin with. He finally sounds like HIM, instead of like a girl's feelings trapped in a boy :P Kudos! I can't wait to read the next part.
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is coming along brilliantly - the pacing, the humour, the undercurrents of attraction...i loved the line abt how conveniently located all the empty classrooms were, btw :-D great job!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i sooo loved it !!!!!!:)
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! I love the Draco I-so-hate-you-but-I-desire-at-the-same-time.
continue please!!!! :D
continue please!!!! :D
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Apparently, not being a native english speaker/writer makes you even better at spelling, grammar, and rhetoric than natives! I loved your description in the change of attitudes, and I'm wishing for you to add to this, or write another bit of amazing-ness, but this is perfect as is. :-)
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god he such a bitch!! LOL!!! hope she turns this on his nicely...
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another awesome chapter! I can't wait to see how this turns out.
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. I can't believe english isn't your first language. You should be betaing for me! I didn't see one single itty bitty mistake, and I really hope you don't stop this story any time soon. It's too good and you are too good of a writer to keep your creative talent from the world. I'll be waiting semi-patiently for the next installment :)
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you decided to continue! I want to see where this goes.
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was really good, and you did portray Draco really well which I am having a hard time doing at the moment, so I know it isn't easy. If DarkPheonix wants to read a story where "Malfoy accosts Hermione and she basically makes mincemeat of him," then they can write one themselves! You can't please everybody :)
I would beta your next chapter for grammar mistakes and spelling if you can't find anyone else to, but I can't promise perfection. Seriously though, awesome work, keep it up!
-Lizzy
I would beta your next chapter for grammar mistakes and spelling if you can't find anyone else to, but I can't promise perfection. Seriously though, awesome work, keep it up!
-Lizzy