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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic--the back-and-forth between them, the fighting for dominance, is very well done. The smut's pretty nice, too! :)
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I find your characters being quite IC ;) I'm liking very much the "relationship" which is forming between Draco and Hermione, how cute that he doesn't want anyone else but her, ahahah! I hope you update soon because I'm very intrigued, good job!
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! What an explosive fic! I can actually see this sort of by-play between these 2 characters taking place. Great writing...Keep up the good work!!
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as always. I am equally jealous of and thankful for your wonderful writing talent. You better not stop any time soon!
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I like how you're keeping them in character...Can't wait to see what they do next! :D
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the Draco/Hermione stories on this site! I think you've captured the characters perfectly! I do think it would be interesting to do a chapter from Draco's POV, but then again who knows what goes on in the minds of boys? Great job on this story. I'm glad I found it.
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wooo-hooo! Loved it! Also liked that little twist at the end. I liked your writing in this chapter, esp the bit about the mirror version of Hermione and how it takes some balance work to stay on that broom lol people always say "ooo it's because of quidditch they're all defined" but they never give one thought to a "how" or ever try to explain it in an entertaining way, anyways very well done :)
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this. You do the feelings and personalities so perfectly, I'm sorry I just don't have any constructive criticism to offer. Just keep doing what you're doing!
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not very good at real and good criticism. Can I just that I will kill you if you don't continue this story? (hope this is a positive comment)
I'M LOVING IT ALL THE WAY THROUGH !!!!! :D
I love Confused!Draco.
I'M LOVING IT ALL THE WAY THROUGH !!!!! :D
I love Confused!Draco.
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi, Love the story please update. They are really in charakter. Please write more!!