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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay...I'm offically HOOKED on this het pairing! This is a rare one for me in the HP fics! That's two Draco/Hermione fics I'm hooked on now! More! ASAP! *grins* EM
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* Oh lordy, I look forward to the big reveal whenever that happens. I love that they still get pissy at each other, but you've moved them slowly enough towards this time where they can banter comfortably. Some stories they go from hate to fluff and it doesn't make sense. You've walked them through hate to passion to tentative friendship and I adore it. Awesomeness!
Only one issue of criticism - there's never a description of location. I'm making it up in my head as I read (which is a perk as a reader), but then again, it's slightly disorienting to never know where someone is in space or what the area looks like. I'm not saying go Hemingway on it and take a whole page to describe the locale, but some orientation in space-time would be awesome.
Only one issue of criticism - there's never a description of location. I'm making it up in my head as I read (which is a perk as a reader), but then again, it's slightly disorienting to never know where someone is in space or what the area looks like. I'm not saying go Hemingway on it and take a whole page to describe the locale, but some orientation in space-time would be awesome.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the story very much so far. Good plot with some goos smut!!!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol ignore the whining in my previous review about my e-mail seeing as I forgot to actually check it and see a heads up -blushes-
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it loved it. Thankyou
This I am really likeing about this story Is that you can I can feel slowly Draco and Hermione falling in love with each other or at least falling very deeply it is slowly moving past the lust stage of were we where when the story first started. It is perecftly paced.
This I am really likeing about this story Is that you can I can feel slowly Draco and Hermione falling in love with each other or at least falling very deeply it is slowly moving past the lust stage of were we where when the story first started. It is perecftly paced.
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was really cool how you wrote Hermione's first blow job!!! Sexy as usual..you never disapoint...keep it coming : )
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um, so hot, that I am literally warmer. And I ended the chapter going, "Wait, what, why am I in this computer chair with no hot man...?"
:) I REALLY enjoy this story.
:) I REALLY enjoy this story.
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. you're amazing. The sleepy conversations they have are darling.
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're story is amazing!
I havent been able to stop reading it!
Hope there's more soon!!! xx
I havent been able to stop reading it!
Hope there's more soon!!! xx
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely addicted to this. You're an INCREDIBLE smut writer--the best I've ever read, by far. Pleeeassse keep it up as often as Draco does ;)