schedule
October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Her whole "He loves me, he loves me not" inner dialogue is just so accurate. How she desperately tries to find that little something in his words to give her hope, how hope comes and goes. I love this chapter and how close you come to real life.
schedule
October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!
Yes, this is very much like a soap. Up, down, happy, mad. You have really, REALLY captured Draco and I applaud you for that. I have my own stories that he is NOTHING lie the books cause I just can't get it.
From the sweet kiss after their love making to the coldness he showed her in the hallway, seeing her in the Great Hall and then finding her in that room, my heart was pounding, anticipating what was going to happen. Would he break it off? Would he finally admit how he felt? Well, he did tell her the truth. It would get them all killed if they found out. And to throw Ginny in the mix of finding them kissing, that was freakin' AWESOME!
Looking forward to your next installment. What will she tell Ginny?? Ooohhhh.
Yes, this is very much like a soap. Up, down, happy, mad. You have really, REALLY captured Draco and I applaud you for that. I have my own stories that he is NOTHING lie the books cause I just can't get it.
From the sweet kiss after their love making to the coldness he showed her in the hallway, seeing her in the Great Hall and then finding her in that room, my heart was pounding, anticipating what was going to happen. Would he break it off? Would he finally admit how he felt? Well, he did tell her the truth. It would get them all killed if they found out. And to throw Ginny in the mix of finding them kissing, that was freakin' AWESOME!
Looking forward to your next installment. What will she tell Ginny?? Ooohhhh.
schedule
October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more, more, more, more, more
schedule
October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* these last chapters were just SO amazing. I am almost afraid of what is going to happen... I hope Ginny isn't the downfall of it all! Damn you Ginny! I guess I will have to carry my computer around with me from now on so i don't miss your next update because I need to know what happens, like now. I love this so much!
schedule
October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the you research! It makes the story all the more beliveable. The emotions were so intense, I was getting freaked out! I still loved it anyways! I hope I see an update soon! This makes my day! (I'm not kidding, I failed my Calc test today :)
geo
geo
schedule
October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!
not to mention I WANT TO KILL YOU!
we can forget about BUT YOU ROCK AND I LOVE YOU!
last but not least PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
and OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!
not to mention I WANT TO KILL YOU!
we can forget about BUT YOU ROCK AND I LOVE YOU!
last but not least PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
schedule
October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Comment for Chapter 10:
...And that is the reason why I'm stuck on this ship.
You just opened the unknown reason for me.
Brilliant.
For Chapter 11:
It never gets boring.. The stories is on full temp!
Keep going.
Update soon Please?
Verie
...And that is the reason why I'm stuck on this ship.
You just opened the unknown reason for me.
Brilliant.
For Chapter 11:
It never gets boring.. The stories is on full temp!
Keep going.
Update soon Please?
Verie
schedule
October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story. in chapter two, end. normally, people storm slowly, so others can see they are mad. that is the purpose of storming. *BUT* you said that he stormed as if chased by the dark lord. that would imply that he went quickly, which clashes with stormed. im trying my hand at constructive crit, lol sorry if a tad verbose.
schedule
October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Please, please give it a happy ending! I love the Hermione/Draco pairing, and I like how you've made this story plausible. Keep wirtiong, and maybe a somewhat less plausible happy future for them...
schedule
September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey! i just read this story for the first time! it's really good, please keep going! it's nice to see their relationship grow, please keep up the great work!
please less fighting though...I'm not requesting fluffy fluff...but the constant fighting and stubbornness from Hermione is just really redundant and it feels like nothing is progressing. that's just a request though, it's your story and you're the author! thanks so much for writing such an interesting, unique story!
:-D
please less fighting though...I'm not requesting fluffy fluff...but the constant fighting and stubbornness from Hermione is just really redundant and it feels like nothing is progressing. that's just a request though, it's your story and you're the author! thanks so much for writing such an interesting, unique story!
:-D