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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful! You are a fantastic writer! I love how you've kept Draco in character, but I'm a little sad at the inevitable "end of the affair". This is my favorite ship, and as unrealistic as it is, I prefer seeing them "happily ever after". But please don't see this is a critism, I love what you're writing. It's like bittersweet chocolate to me!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it!!!! really good new chapter!! cant wait to see what you are planning for us!! dont wait to long to update please..
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
By the way, fifteen is way too short.
Drop out of school, it's not worth it when compared to this story.
I know I'm contemplating it ;-P
haha, anytime you're free for another chapter would be wonderful :-)
Drop out of school, it's not worth it when compared to this story.
I know I'm contemplating it ;-P
haha, anytime you're free for another chapter would be wonderful :-)
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That tugged at the heartstrings...and I'm glad to find out that I'm not the only obsessive compulive writer when it comes to researching!!! (I wrote a chapter for a story I'm posting on fanfiction.net for CSI: NY that I went as far as to research flight times and numbers for 2 people that were flying to Paris!)
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a good job with Hermione! It's perfect! :D Now... let's move on to Draco, shall we? I seriously NEED to know what's going on in that head of his!
It seems like the pressure of secrecy is on to them. I'm deeply intrigued on how you're going to play that out. Update soon!
It seems like the pressure of secrecy is on to them. I'm deeply intrigued on how you're going to play that out. Update soon!
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, here i was thinking that all the lovey dovey stuff would come along next, and he'd perhaps show his love but no! you changed it so they're even more distant now! =O anticipating your next chapter =) loving it =)
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great!
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. That's not good. Let's just hope she can convince Ginny not to say anything. Can't wait for more!
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are indeed evil. Building up that romantic scene where she figures he really does like her, only to ruin it... I like it.
Also the insight into her confusion and angst is good I think. I agree that being smart doesn't make you better to handle emotions at all. Actually I would almost say it's the opposite. Smart people tend to think too much, sometimes too much for their own good.
Also the insight into her confusion and angst is good I think. I agree that being smart doesn't make you better to handle emotions at all. Actually I would almost say it's the opposite. Smart people tend to think too much, sometimes too much for their own good.
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh on. You are a master at your craft. I loved that Chapter. But can I just saysomething after re reading your story I notice that Draco got a happy off of Hermione in Chapter 9. But poor Hermione has been left hanging. Surly the boys dont get to have all the fun. :)
Once agin Thankyou so much for the update Im on tender hooks to see what happens next.
Once agin Thankyou so much for the update Im on tender hooks to see what happens next.