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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. It's compelling, it's hot, it's in character, and while it may be AU, it manages to stay close to canon, which is always a neat trick to pull off. For someone who isn't a native English speaker, you use of the language is impressive. In fact, there are far too many fanfics by native speakers which aren't nearly as literate or grammatical as what you've done here. I'm not saying your usage is flawless, but it is very good. I'm looking forward to seeing how you bring this tale to resolution. But right now, I'm off to read that sequel to "Master," which I also enjoyed, even if someone else wrote the sequel.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um. My last comment might not have been clear. I meant I enjoyed Master, though it is indeed a very different kind of fic, as well as enjoying Silencio. I don't know yet whether or not I'll like Heir until I find it and read it, right? But, I already like the fact that someone did a sequel, because that was a good story, and while I totally get why you don't want to take it further, I also totally get why fans of it would want it to be taken further. Sigh. I really should not write reviews when I'm severely sleep deprived, but there you have it. Essential point is, I like the stories you tell and want more.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update I love this story
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That,my dear, was intense! I love what you did with Draco's thoughts/inner voice, so heartbreaking. I just wanted to hug him. Being in a forbidden love sure is shitty!
Yes, I do like Shaw, im curious about her future involvement. Great chapter, nicely crafted.Now,bring us the one please.
Yes, I do like Shaw, im curious about her future involvement. Great chapter, nicely crafted.Now,bring us the one please.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD..... IHATE YOU..... NO I DONT I LOVE YOU..... what a roller coster ride this story is turning out to be. I really want to hate Draco But I cant.
Please up date soon
Please up date soon
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so sad. I just discovered your story and now is one of my favorites! Thank you :)
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know that scenes like this one are necessary but they hurt me all the same! I love it, pain and all. I am a masochist for literary pain, I guess, but good ending feel better. I really hope everything works out. I love Hermione but I feel even worse about Draco. This made me want to cry! It made my day, all the same!
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh can I jsut ask one more question. Do bI sense a sequal to this story. I mean we have the whole of seventh year to get thought as well yet. Ohhh there could be loads of Dramione goodiness.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE i think i'm going to die... i love your story SOOOOOOOOOO much... pweese bring more :)
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are a very talented writer and I am very much enjoying this story... You leave me on the edge of my seat consistently and write Draco so well! I am very interested to know where this will go and I am really looking forward to new chapters--don't keep us waiting for too long!!
Bravo!!
Bravo!!