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by AkashaTheKitty

person ichiruki
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! "Filler chapter" was fun to read, like the bit about including the nasty spell Harry shot off at him in the bathroom, and your extra research is well appreciated :) very believable potions lesson.

However, as the time ticks down I wonder what is going to happen when it's time to off DD, yikes, I wait in dread anticipation, oh how will it all end up from there? (see how I naturally assume that sixth year will end as it did in canon-yes that's what fuels the anticipation-ok and excitement.)

schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh its all coming together nicely. it like you are Snape and you are a great posion master and now we are getting to the point where the poo is really gonna hit the fan.

person Verie
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. Angst to the fullest. This gives me the chills. Your story is just so unpredictable, and I love it.
Don't you think that Shaw should talk to Hermione or something.. Well, that's just me. :]

And oh, thanks for the update! and the mail alert!

Til your next update.. Hopefully soon. :]

Verie
person Raksha
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wanted to let you know that I really like your story. It flows really well and has great attention to detail. I like how you use such good characterisms and the plot runs very smoothly, I have enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work :)
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate fighting Draco and Hermoine... I hope they end up getting together again...But i do like how you pulled off the cliche. Again, excellent work!
person cass
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"I just need to pick up the pieces of my heart..." Chapter 12, once again I love how you portrait a broken heart and Hermione, humbling herself, doing his homework, was just so sad.
Its a good thing that you finally show us some light, with them working together. I do hope it will help Hermione see through his barriers and stop her grief.
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! As filler goes with was very well written! Didn't seem like filler at all!
person Nakita
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*claps*
Bravo!
Thank you so much for this story...
person sarah
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, keep up the good work! i hope draco will stop being such an asshole!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more! That is all I can say as you already know how much I love this story!