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Chapter 14 was well written. Sometimes when chapters are too long and drawn out I skip parts. But not this one! I thought you reprented Draco's conflict and Hermione's insecurity superbly. Keep up the great work.

The summary blurb does not do your story justice. I would consider revising to reflect your finely contructed piece of fiction.

Im not finish reading your story but i would like you to know how enamored i am with it! The plot is not so original but your incredible writing made it so different from the rest! I love the way you make Draco squirm and work so hard to get Hermione. I love Draco but he really has to be put down from his pedestal once i a while. Hermione is really something here! You made her so temptingly delicious, mysterious and unpredictable Draco didnt know what hit him! Every scene is sinfully sexy and exciting i am hyperventilating! LOL! Hope this will be a happy ending in the end. I dont know how you will do it but i am counting on it!

I wonder? Antidote? What Antidote? I could guess the dark golden potion which is the Lucky Potion. But Antidote? Why does he need to smash it anyway?
And oh yah, happy ending please! Despite seeing of a small chance of it being one. Maybe you will pull some strings to make it a happy ending, right? Right? RIGHT?!

And one last... Update Soon. :)

I feel so bad for them! But great chapter.

love the new chapter!!! excellent writing, i think however that this story is not going to have an happy ever after.. we no how book 6 ended, still i am in love with this sory. It is just so exciting!!! You are a really good writer!!!

oh my godddddddddddddddd. That has to be your best chapter yet. They love each other. I knew it. Right im gonna ready myself cus I sense a whole lot of heart break in the nexy chapter.

Congrats for the norm I really hope you win. This story is a gem

Wow... reading this story always leaves me at a loss for words. It is THAT good...and amazing...and just- WOW. I wonder what the potion was, was it that lucky potion Harry won (I don't remember what it was called)? I cannot wait to find out, but at the same time I don't want this to end. I can't believe you can write so much and have it be so well written in such a short amount of time. That's some serious talent... can I just pay you to finish my stories for me lol.
Anywhoo, bring on the next chapter!

I just have to read it all over again - its that great.
The Chapter was worth the extra lateness of your posting.
Hmm. What potion would that be? To tell you the truth, I am really clueless. Nothing in mind.
Nada.
I'm just excited to know what's going to happen now that they mutually know each other's feelings.
Well, there goes Draco's Mission.

Thanks for the mail alert again. :] Every time you do that I never fail to panic and rush. :]

Verie

This is such a good story! And it makes me sad to think about what happend in the book! I'm just hopping that you found a way to keep them together...It's amazing the way you are writing this to match the book! great, just great! Thanks

please don't let it be a finished hate potion that he intends to give hermione or himself, or both or.... :(