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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU END IT LIKE THAT! YOU BETTER WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm crying. That was SO sad... SO emotional... but SO amazing!! This story is just absolutely amazing, I can't even tell you. I hope you win the awards you are up for. I'll vote for you! I can't wait for more of your work, and for the sequel to this, I hope it's soon, but you do deserve a break sooo whenever is fine with me. I LOVED this whole story, every single chapter of it, including this last one, even though it wasn't a happily ever after. LOVED IT!!!!!!!
More more more more more more more more more!!!! PLEASE!!!
-Lizzy
More more more more more more more more more!!!! PLEASE!!!
-Lizzy
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, you better be mentally prepared for all the flames you're gonna get for that ending! :P
I do kind of wish it was a happier ending but this one was actually very interesting. However,it was kind rushed and abrupt if compared to the other chapters. If the emotions in the scenes were more defined and dragged on a little longer, I think it would have been a more satisfying ending. But overall, the scene did make me cry and the whole fading memory thing was really creative and I enjoyed it.Aww, Crying Draco!
I assume you're re-reading DH for the sequel, since Silencio seem to be based heavily on Draco's activity and Harry's obsessive curiousity in DH. Oh, and that final dialogue between Harry and Hermione(and all the others in fic)....Nice touch! In the book, Hermione keep dismissing Draco's behaviour and I keep asking "Why, is there something going on??" and Silencio pretty much gave me an imaginative answer to that!
I do kind of wish it was a happier ending but this one was actually very interesting. However,it was kind rushed and abrupt if compared to the other chapters. If the emotions in the scenes were more defined and dragged on a little longer, I think it would have been a more satisfying ending. But overall, the scene did make me cry and the whole fading memory thing was really creative and I enjoyed it.Aww, Crying Draco!
I assume you're re-reading DH for the sequel, since Silencio seem to be based heavily on Draco's activity and Harry's obsessive curiousity in DH. Oh, and that final dialogue between Harry and Hermione(and all the others in fic)....Nice touch! In the book, Hermione keep dismissing Draco's behaviour and I keep asking "Why, is there something going on??" and Silencio pretty much gave me an imaginative answer to that!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story line. I love the ending, although I do also have hope for a sequel *puppy dog eyes*
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I'm completely depressed...but the mention of a sequal makes up for that. I actually find what he did to be very romantic and selfless on his part. But, I think that it's good that he remembers at least. And I can see what he wouldn't/couldn't go to the Order for protection for he and his family. His dad is in Azkaban...it's not exactly hard to get someone killed in prison if you have the right connections, which the Dark Lord has. Anyway, looking forward to the sequal!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok...i'm just in shock, i can't believe it ended that way, in a way it's brilliant and really amazing, but at the same time AAAAAARGHHH :'( so sad!
well i was just about to throw my computer through the window when i read SEQUEL... which makes it a little bit better haha, definately i'll be looking forward to it!
well i was just about to throw my computer through the window when i read SEQUEL... which makes it a little bit better haha, definately i'll be looking forward to it!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I almost want to kill you....but then I wouldn't get another story, so I won't. I do kinda like the way it ended. Especially since you are sticking close to canon. That opens up loads of possibilites for setting the sequel after DH (ignorning the epilogue, of course) and really seeing their relationship take off. Then she could find out what he did....the possibilites are endless! Now to quote the wonderful Charles Dickens (with a minor change) "Please ma'am, can I have some more?" :p
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit! I had both of my hands over my mouth, trying to hold back my scream. My mom and brother would have killed me if I woke them up. I need to read more stuff from you! I LOVE your work! I honestly never saw this coming! I felt nauseated with shock! my heart is still racing, and I don't think I'm going to sleep tonight! I love you!!!!!!!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say. It is so sad but so perfect, but my chest aches and I feel my eyes welling with tears. I love this story so much and I am begging for a sequal or another story, as long as it is written by you, because as much as I love HGDM I love the writing by authors like you. Real writers that take the time and are amazing in their own way. I would follow you to the end, and I guess I did. It was so saddly perfect... :) :(
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! that was so sad! it actually made me shed a few tears =( gosh i feel so sorry for draco..