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for Only one night

by kelliechar

person Kmiles
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is quite refreshing, were you planning on writing anymore?

The poetry...is it supposed to be written by the woman...found it a bit out of place

Anywho..keep it up fellow writer ^ ^

*Sigh* meeting Lucius on a dark and rainy night...nice setting
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was such a nice change from the straight out smut fests we find on aff.
I can't help but think, is this little Draco?
Very well written.
Endlessly Entertaining,
Mary
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This Lucius is a true, merciless, soulless Death Eater, I see. It's sad what happened to the mother and father, but what will happen to Dante with such a father I think will be even worse. He'll always have the taint of a halfblood heritage. It would have been kinder to kill him, too. Too many Purebloods know what Lucius did to his parents. He'll find out someday. How incredibly sad.

That's one of my favorite songs - by Heart.
person Extraho
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw. i can't really say it was super sad, but i see the poetic point ( the ironic one too) in it. it was very sweet.