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for Cramped Quarters

by IncessantDarkness29

schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The conversation about it being pink was amusing. :) Fantastic job.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my! No need to worry, my friend! This fic was beautifully hot. Draco was gorgeous with that pink dildo, and Harry's hunger equally enticing. Thank you for such a fantastic fic!

I love the scene with Draco and the pink dildo, it's amusing and hot all at once. And Harry's reaction is just priceless and one of those lovely H/D moments. I like Harry taking control, too. :D

Mmm. Nice response to Lady Diablo's challenge! You sure made that pink dildo (and GLASS? Whoa!) interesting!
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well. Shit. I've been reading Distorted Exposure and loving every bit, and I came searching in hopes that you've been writing other things too... and well... wow. That was so amazingly written, and so amazingly hot that I'm a bit at a loss for words. Damn. Great job.
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quarters are way to cramped. Harry should've been able to walk in on Draco a while ago. This was hot and heavy and you are worried that it didin't come out to well. Hmph, it came out pretty great. Imagine walking in on nemesis in the throes of self created pleasure...okay now imagine your hot blonde, grey eyed nemesis wrathing in the throes of self pleasure...wouldn't you jump his bones too, especially if he played for you team?

There are a few typos, but beyond that the grammar is fine. Nothing a quick read over can't fix. Good job.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*lolls around limply* this was fantastic. A few spelling errors that didn't really take away from it at all, although I have to ask what "abnomally" is supposed to be... anomally? abomination? it made me stop reading and go, 'uwah?" XD
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was soooo hott!
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Be still my heart...Please excuse me while I take a much needed cold shower, yes? That was...hot. Oh dear lord, and the pink dildo! xD.

With love,
Ristvak
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schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was frecking HOT!!!! What is it about Draco that no matter who you pair him up with it's HOT!
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was so far beyond great! Thanks... you should definatley keep it up! :)
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I think you did great! You did so great, it desreves an eppy! Do they continue, have a relationship, fall in love, are they together after school? There is so much more we need to know! I can see them together..doing it all over Grimmauld Place(after they fix it up that is).