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Oh, I really think Draco could fix him.... This is a good start to a deep story, you can just sense from what you wrote the feelings that drove Harry to act this way. He just hasn't forgiven himself for his own nature. More please!

I think it's definitely worth continuing. You have something interesting here, and I'd personally be interested in seeing what kind of part Draco would play in the story. Whether he'd be someone who'd be part of creating the worthlessness Harry feels or he'd be someone who'd be able to instill worth in him. I'd definitely love to see it be the second.

i thought it was good and id like you to continue if you want.:)

Oh Harry! He doesn't want this but he can't stop. He needs someone to dominate him. To take care of and control him. Please tell me there's going to be a chapter 2!

i really think u can do the angst justice this is a very well written first chapter has a nice feel and is very enjoyable i love pics with slutty harry and bossy dom draco and ill be very disapointed if i dont see more of this cause i think it has some good potential