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for On My Own

by BBond

person Tony
schedule June 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I do like this story, the grammar and the like can be fixed by a Beta, someo me who reads the story and sends you editing notes. Other than that I can't wait to read more.
person moni
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great reading, so far. I can't wait to read chap. 10, & hopefully many more chapters from u.
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey when r u gonna put more chapters up this is really great i cant wait for more
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep going and update soon PLEASE!!!
person AshRenn
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I FING LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! HURRY UP AND FISISH IT!!!!!!!
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cant wait! whats the sex of the baby?just nosy.
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved that, "she completes you". it made me laugh.
so, i really like this story. one thing that's bugging me, though, is that you keep saying "reliving" instead of "realizing". other than that, i can't wait to read the rest!
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so he finally knows.
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow pansy's such a mood breaker
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like I like update soon