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for Lap Me in Enmity

by Emeline

person RainAddict_CM
schedule June 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn. That was insanely hot. Just wow. I have never really thought of those two together, but now they won't leave my mind lol. Nicely done. You definitely have a gift.
person Pull
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLZ, make this into a series. I would love this as a series so much ^^
person Iivanainen
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I read this on a dare from my Beta, let me tell you that I normally HATE femmeslash, but crap, this is the best shit I've ever read.. I want more.. it can be for the fact that I'm A LOT like Lavender actually and I dream of someone to do to me what Hermione did to Lavender, but still. More? Thanks ~Iivanainen
person Oric13
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was certainly an interesting take on the Hermione/Lavender animosity. Nicely done.
person chikita_banana
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. I like the way you write, no dirty words, okay, except "cock" and "fucking". hehe You should write more...
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I most definetly did not think I'd like this. But I did.. Good job xD
person chikita_banana
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty awesome. Very well written. I love how Lavender is here, so devoted. ^_^ YOu should write more of this.
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written...

The thought of Lavender as a Sub is intriguing...

Well Done